I miss you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Aqua530, Jul 7, 2015.

  1. If only you were here,
    Then maybe i wouldnt feel lonely.
    If only i can just see your face,
    Then maybe it might lessen the burdens
    I am feeling right now.

    You told me to be strong.
    To promise not to cry when youre gone.
    To be brave enough to face the reality,
    That you would no longer be here...

    And i live with that now.
    I wish i can tell you. I wish i can just atleast
    Cry in your shoulder for one more time.
    And how i wish you know how i need you now.

    But i know...
    I know that i wouldnt be a good friend
    A good bestfriend if i bother you there.
    I know that if i continue to be like this..
    I will be selfish.

    So even if its hard.
    Even it kills me inside,
    And even i miss you that much...
    I will pretend im not. For i know
    Thats what you always wanted me to be.
    To be happy even youre not here.

    (I miss you. May you rest in peace)
     
    #1 Aqua530, Jul 7, 2015
  2. No critique necessary, this was from the heart and that's appreciated. May you find peace. ?
     
    #2 Wes-theworthyandpowerful, Jul 8, 2015
  3. Miss you too babe
     
    #3 Gadjet, Jul 11, 2015
  4. The epitome of an asshole thing to say.
     
    #4 Satans_Crow, Jul 12, 2015
  5. That's spit for you. An asshole. 
     
    #5 FallenAngel12321, Jul 13, 2015
  6. Haven't you been here since like 2011 FallenAngel? 
     
    #6 Wes-theworthyandpowerful, Jul 13, 2015
  7. Early 2012 but yeah
     
    #7 FallenAngel12321, Jul 13, 2015
  8. You remember AdamGontier by chance? I think I remember you. Lol
     
    #8 Wes-theworthyandpowerful, Jul 13, 2015
  9. ARE YOU ADAM??
     
    #9 FallenAngel12321, Jul 13, 2015
  10. ^ NO BABY BUT I CAN BE THA ADAM TO YOUR EVE!
     
    #10 Gadjet, Jul 15, 2015
  11. V_V
     
    #11 Satans_Crow, Jul 15, 2015
  12. You need to chill like forreal
     
    #12 FallenAngel12321, Jul 15, 2015
  13. BRAH I'M AS CHILL AS A DEAD BODY!
     
    #13 Gadjet, Jul 18, 2015
  14. Then go stuff yourself in the freezer :/
     
    #14 FallenAngel12321, Jul 18, 2015
  15. That comeback though.. Like damn...
     
    #15 Wes-theworthyandpowerful, Jul 19, 2015
  16. Agreed
     
    #16 Blood_Goddess_Kalysta, Jul 19, 2015
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