Um an old poem

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Nutella, Jul 6, 2015.

  1. When my mother passed on I wrote this and yeah it kinda sucks but it's just what I wrote then.


    It once felt as if the world was a place where nothing could go wrong, but that only lasted for so long. You were supposed to protect me and pick me up when I fell, but you wrecked things and made my life a living hell. I was supposed to be the most important thing to you, but I became nothing as your addiction grew. I longed every day that the old you would return, but that couldn't happen as I would soon learn. People on the outside couldn't see, but you were no longer the person you used to be. I wondered if this was all my fault, but I figured out nothing I could've done would've made this halt. You finally gave up and passed on, but the thing was you were already gone. I loved you with all of my heart, but the mother I loved died when alcohol did its part.
     
  2. Go keeeeelsssss wooooh!
     
  3. Im just supporting your post. sorry. lol
     
  4. Tank chu
     
  5. Good rhyming :D
     
  6. This a good poem
     
  7. That was really good.
     
  8. Poetry seems to be a big part in many of our lives. Im wondering how many would support a poetry thread? I could simply create one if anyone is interested.
     
  9. THIS THRAD NEEDS TO BLOOM!
     
  10. Heres one I wrote. I will create the poetry thread when I can.


    Closing my eyes
    Trying to drown out the noise
    All the yelling & screaming
    At those poor little boys.

    Tears running down their cheeks
    Fear rests in their eyes
    The one they call mother
    Filling their heads with lies

    Youre nothing, I hate you
    Youre just like your dad!
    I dont want you, Get away from me!
    You make me yell, youre too stupid to see.

    My head is pounding
    As these words enter my brain
    Rocking as I cry,
    Literally going insane.

    The boys are still screaming
    She slaps them across the face
    Right now Im thinking
    Death would be a better place

    With nowhere to go
    They sit there & cry
    I wish I could take them
    Their mom kickin rocks goodbye