If Forever Dont Exist

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xxLePrincessxx, Jun 17, 2015.

  1. If forever don't exist,
    What comes in the last?
    If forever don't exist,
    What lies in the end?

    If there is no Forever,
    I think its the memories by itself.
    Memories that worth remembering,
    And a memories that will be treasured.

    You might go away and leave.,
    We might not be destined, but
    The memories we shared will be
    With me, until the last drop of my breath.
     
    #1 xxLePrincessxx, Jun 17, 2015
  2. Forever don't exist? Forever do not exist? I believe that should be does not? Or doesn't maybe?
     
    #2 Wes-theworthyandpowerful, Jul 1, 2015
  3. There's quite a bit more than just that that is grammatically incorrect.
     
    #3 Satans_Crow, Jul 2, 2015
  4. I completely agree. I just felt like taking one grammatical step at a time. 
     
    #4 Wes-theworthyandpowerful, Jul 2, 2015
  5. Don't = do not.
    Forever do not exist?

    Doesn't = does not
    Forever does not exist!
     
    #5 peepeepoopoo, Jul 11, 2015
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