Friend...Or not

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jess5509, Jun 30, 2011.

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  1. wrll most of them are her friend..she needs to face the real world.... not everyone is going to like her story...
     
    #41 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 1, 2011
  2. ...wow...
     
    #42 *Goldluka (01), Jul 1, 2011
  3. Sign up for my story, i need a main character!
     
    #43 *k3ll3y (01), Jul 1, 2011
  4. Chris. Seriously? If you have criticism then don't give it to her unless you have advice to improve it. Because THAT'S THE REAL WORLD. what an she do to improve the story? From my point of view, even though I'm her friend, I think it's good !!! I don't let my personal opinion influence the opinion of her writing!
     
    #44 MickyMcLovin, Jul 1, 2011
  5. A little bit of a quick start....but I think you used it to be an attention grabber to pull people in right away soo...and can I be in it?
     
    #45 *bruinshockeygirl (01), Jul 1, 2011
  6. mickey, me not liking it represents support because i took my time to write a comment, soo she could improvr
     
    #46 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 2, 2011
  7. What about it do you not like? You can't just say it's bad and leave it at that. If you didn't like the POV, or the grammatical errors, stuff like that. What your doing is just bagging on her.
     
    #47 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  8. like i said before its plain and straight forward
     
    #48 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 2, 2011
  9. Ohmigod
     
    #49 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  10. Ahh Yes , my friends. O e of the only reasons I evn statte son this story was becaus ei was pissed and my stories are how I control my feelings. :D Yes it was a quick start, but I wanted to get the point out that I was pissed at her  ^.^



    I still luvs ya though (U no who u r) (>^.^)>

    ]£$$
     
    #50 Jess5509, Jul 2, 2011
  11. <(*.*<) lol I feel so loved jesslmao look at my storyyour chloe
     
    #51 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  12. hmmmm
     
    #52 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 2, 2011
  13. shock is coursing thru my veins:/
     
    #53 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  14. you make me sound like a heartless person 
     
    #54 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 2, 2011
  15. That's kind of our view of you
     
    #55 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  16. our , as in you n jess??.....thats nice 
     
    #56 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 2, 2011
  17. Oh wait no don't take that in offense lol I'm sure you have a mean veiw of us too!
     
    #57 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  18. nope, i dont.. you guys are pree kind and funny.. sometimes annoying but w.e
     
    #58 *-MysteryVan- (01), Jul 2, 2011
  19. Ηmmmmm
     
    #59 MickyMcLovin, Jul 2, 2011
  20. Where is story? :mad:
     
    #60 *Goldluka (01), Jul 2, 2011
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