Mom: Hi son Son: Hey mom •_• Mom: How was school? Son: It was ok Mom: Want some dinner? Son: Nah, no thanks, I have a lot of homework to catch up on Mom: But honey, I made your favorite dinner Son: Sorry, mom, I'll eat when I'm done, *walks to room* Mom: *sighs* *40 minutes later* Son: Mom, I'm a bit hungry, can you fix my plate? Mom: Sure, *gets up and smiles* Son: Ummm, mom? What are you wearing? Mom: Oops, sorry, I meant this for your father. Son: Oh, ok Mom: Do you like it? Son: Ummm...*shrugs* I don't know, I'm not that hungry anymore *walks back in room*
Son: *walks in room and sits on bed* What the hell was that all about? Mom has been acting weird towards me since my dad has been going on his business trips. I have to get outta this house for a while *picks up cell phone* Johny: Hello? Son: Hey dude, you think I can go crash at your place for a while? Johny: No, my mom said I can't have any guests tonight Son: Dude please, I need to get out ta this house for a couple hours Johny: Sorry, dude its my mom's rules, when she says I can't have any guests, I can't have any guests, Son: Fine, I'll talk to you tommarow *hangs up* Mom: Honey, *opens door and peeks in* Son: Hey, mom Mom: I made you a plate of tuna casserole, *holds out plate* Son: Thanks, *takes plate and sets on stand* Mom: So, are you ok? *sits next to Son* Son: I'm fine, *looks down* Mom: Hmmm, Son: Look mom thanks for the dinner Mom: Your welcome *scoots closer to Son* Son: Mom, this is weird... Mom: *smiles* How? Son: I don't think you should sit this close to me, Mom: Why not? Son: I think its bad, Mom: *sets hand on Son's lap* Its not bad honey, Son: I'm tired *gets up and looks down at his Mom* Mom: Ok, *gets up and sighs and gets out closing door behind her* Son: .......
Story is filled with metaphors, similes and is very descriptive. The characters are so realistic and you can totally relate to them. I love this story! I am your number one fan. 89.7/10.
The Next Morning.... Son: *runs out door quickly* Mom: Honey, Son: *stops and sighs* Hey mom Mom: Where ya headed to? Son: School Mom: Oh, no honey, I called your teacher this morning your not going to school today *smirks* Son: What? Why? Mom: Because your gonna be running errands with me today. Son: What? That's the stupidest thing ever, you couldn't have waited until I got out of school?!? Mom: We would never got done with them quicker if I waited that long, Son: Where is your brother Ricardo? Mom: He's headed out of town today Son: Dad? Mom: He just left on another business trip today, *rolls eyes* I seriously don't understand why he keeps leaving Son: Well it's his job, Mom: Yes, but a woman has needs, and if those needs are not met then came over for the man Son: Dad only does his job Mom: Your dad is in love with that job, Son: Well you too, he loves you too Mom: Last night, when he got in, he didn't give me a kiss, or a hug like he usually did, Son: He was tired, Mom: I doubt that, I'm not as pretty as I used to be, but I do love that man, and I love you too *smiles and feels on Son's chest* Son: Mom.... Mom: Oh its not gonna kill you for me to touch you, you let other girls touch you in WAAY other places then that Son: I haven't Mom: Sure Son: Mom, I still haven't yet.. Mom: Oh, well, I guess that's healthy, *smiles* Son: *shrugs* I guess Mom: Anyway, we better get going...
This feels like its leading up to his mom having her sons lollipop in her mouth. ? then again. It could have a complete twist.