Intro to:Break The FriendShip Wall Marianne how could you,you knew I liked him and you go and have a baby with him that is the most low thing I have ever seen I'll get you Marianne trust and believe me.Now stop you are probably wondering who marianne is let's rewind. Chapter One Ugh back to school it is Marianne said Oh Marianne its not that bad our last school though was horrible said Lucy Marianna replied kill me why don't you I will have to deal with the stuck up girls who put toilet paper in they're bras so they're breast look bigger and the girls that look like clowns from to much make up Don't mind it just be yourself Lucy said OK I guess Marianne replied Oohh look at that cute chunk of boy he looks like Channing Tatum and that guy from Thor had a baby Lucy said First of all Channing Tatum and that guy from Thor could never have a baby together so eww Marianne said Forget ur taste in nerds I like my jocks sweaty and Calvin Klein body model material Lucy replied Go get that chunk of boy and come back to tell me the deets Marianne said Well this is my first story posted to forum so tell me what I need to work on and chapter two will be coming out today or tomorrow if I have time I'll make chapter two today.
Add speech marks or quotation marks, whatever they get called. So instead of; jane exclaimed omg look who it is! Who? Daisy replied. It should be; jane exclaimed "omg, look who it is!" "Who?" Daisy replied curiously, almost jumping at the excitement in her friend's voice. Cringeworthy example, but i hope you get the general idea