Part 11: I woke up instantly as I felt cold ice water hit my face. I looked around and saw I was chained up. "What the ..." I started to say as I looked up. I saw an outline of a Man. I could see his face. He stood there then left. "Hey!" I screamed. "Someone Help me! Professor! Someone!" I looked around, looking for Aidan. "Aidan?..Aidan!?" I saw him leaning against the wall. "Aidan! Help me! We got to get out of here!" He looked at me. "Help yourself." He said coldly. I stared at him. "Aidan.." "You wouldn't be here if you would of listened to me." I just stared. I was speechless. I know why he said that. It was because of...Tim. 2 days later: I'm so hungry. I haven't eaten or drunken anything for two days. Aidan still won't talk to me. I saw a rat pass by. It looked to good. Just as I was thinking this the door opened and a man stepped him. He tossed a tray towards me. I hurried and grabbed the food. Eating it like a wolf pack eats their prey. "Look at you. You're just some poor animal." The Man stated. I looked up at him. "Whe...Where am I?" I asked. "That is none of your concern." He said coldly. "It is. You took me from my home!" I said fiercely. "Oh. Those people?...They Kept you cage. Didn't try to use your power." He said with a smirk. "Don't worry. We will use you..." He started to walk out. "My name is Doctor Xavier... And this is your new home..." A day later: I was strapped down to a chair. "Bring out the one called Aidan." Doctor Xavier Said. "No.. I can't." It was true I couldn't. I couldn't see Aidan anymore. Did he leave? Or was he really just imagery? "Yes you can." He said. "No I can't." I looked at him as I said it. He looked to be in his late 40's. He was bald,had hazel eyes and a scratchy lookin beard. He pushed up his glasses. "Very Well. Hit her." He said looking at me. All of a sudden I felt like 100 bolts hit me. I tried to scream out but couldn't. It was painful. So painful! It stopped and I took a deep breathe. "Now I'm going to tell you again...Bring him out." "N..no." I stammered. Doc Xavier nodded and the electricity hit me again. My fox ears and tail came out and the shock stop. I looked to the side and saw Aidan on the ground. He felt the shock too... "Wonderful...Now its time to begin.."...
Mih... B-but nooooo! ;-; Wall me when you update again, please (sorry if you don't wall people; I always forget who does and who doesn't)
Part 12: I laid there on the cold, hard concrete floor staring at Aidan. I couldn't move or feel anything and neither could he. The doctor injected me with something and it effected us both. Xavier took a blood sample from me. He also put me through these tests that I can't quite remember now. All I could think was "why is he doing this!? Why would Tim betray me!? Why can't I move!? What did I do!?" I tried moving my fingers but it was no use. 5 days later: I tried escaping but it was no use. They were still using the drugs. Aidan still wouldn't help. He turned into a stuck up jerk again.He didn't care what was happening to us. What was happening to me! The door open slowly and the doc. Walked in. "I think its time to test it." He said sweetly. "Tes...Test what?.." I asked questioningly. The pulled out a whip. "Hold her down..." He said coldly. Two guys came and held me up by my arms,my back towards the doc. He moved his arm back and cracked the whip. As it hit my back I dared not to cry. I feared what would happen next. He repeated this over and over ...the pain it didnt hurt as much as it hurt my soul. Each one tearing my skin off from my back. The men tried not to look. I look up and saw Aidan looking at me with tears in his eyes....I think he was taking the pain for me. I smiled at this thought as the whip hit my back once more. Few hours later: Aidan crawled over to me. Tears running down his face. The doc still at it. I don't think there's any skin left on my back by now. The doc stop breathing heavily. He fixed himself. "Well..let this test begin.." he said as he walked out the door. The guys set me down,laying on my tummy, gently. "R..river...?" Aidan whimpered. "I'll get us out of this...I'm so sorry..." " I don't want your help....I don't need it...." I whispered. "I'll get myself out of here..." "River..." He started to say. "I said I don't need your help!.." I whispered fiercely. I winced as the pain hit me.He stared at me. "Get away from me ...this is all your fault anyways...you monster..." I said as my eyes shut and I drifted away...
I only read a little bit of the last part. So she's wincing in pain lying on her stomach and then passed out? Idk what happens next but you should rename story to The Rage in my rear End