I feel like this story progressed too quickly. Aaron and Ashlyn had a few convos that were barely 5 sentences long and she already assumes he's jealous while she's off talking to another man. Try to add a few scenarios with Ashlyn meeting new girlfriends or going on dates outside of school and introduce her family soon. Also your focusing way to much on the romance concept, you should consider adding more mystery/sci-fi into your story other than just the dream incidents. It's also very cliché, like the typical story everyone expects when entering high school. 'Girl meets two guys and is stuck on whom to pick to be her lover'. Try to add something new that hasn't been done often.