Part 5: When we enter the room...it was pink and big. Like a little girls room. It had a bed in a part of the room,a couch in the other part of the room and little play area, with lots of toys to play with. "This is your room River." Professor Reed explained, "if you don't like the color we could change it.." "...no...its fine." I looked at him and smiles a bit. He smiled back. "Well let's get you a bath and then its off to bed!" He said. I just nodded because a bath was what I needed. 4 months later: Reed came into my room while I was coloring a little piggy on my color page. "River, its time for bed." He stated. "5 more minutes?" I insisted. He looked at me with a charming grin, "Fine! Just 5 more minutes. Then off to bed." I smiled as he left the room. I like it here. The kids are nice and don't judge me. The grown ups are caring. But Aidan has changed. He doesn't like to play anymore and he always gets angry at me. "His attitude has change.." Or how professor reed put it. The only thing I don't like are the test. He always makes me do them with Aidan. Aidan always doesn't cooperate. "I think he said its time for bed." Aidan said. "Reed said five more minutes and why do you care its not like you do the test anyways ." I replied frowning at him. Then he hit me! I've never think he could be able to do that! "Cant you see that you are just like the lab rats on TV!?" He said harshly. I just got up and got ready for bed without a word. Late that night I had a bad dream about my parents. I woke up instantly and looked around. I let my eyes adjust to the darkness. There I saw Aidan in the corner crying. "...Aidan are you okay?" I whispered. His head shot up. "Shh! They will hear you!" He said fearfully. Then I turned on my light and saw 10 shadows of figures which were not mine ...in the room...
I was saying that, if there's too many updates, readers won't want to read because there is too much at one time. And Fume, I don't tell people what to do. You're the one constantly pissing me off intentionally for no bloody reason.
Part 6: As I stared frozen in fear each shadow of something that I couldn't even make out. But they were not human shadows. One of them made a loud screeching noise that send all the shadows at me. I fell off my bed and tried to crawl away. The shadows I could see now were solid. They attack me scratching and biting me. I screamed and kicked. "Aidan! Help me! Help me!" I cried feeling the shadows nails in my skin and the big teeth sinking in. I felt my ears appear and my tail. Suddenly everything went black... 3 days later: I awoke to see I was in Professor Reed's bed. I looked around. "Was it a dream?" I thought. "Better yet what am I doing in here?" Then Reed came in and saw i was awake. He rushed over to me. "River your finally awake!...are you feeling better!?...are you the same person?" He said almost screaming yet concerned. "Y..yeah...what happened?...why am I here in your room?" I asked drowsily. He looked at me with a more stern and serious look. " We have met Aidan..." He stated then held his hand up so I wouldn't say anything. "You've been asleep for three days, River. Three nights ago...me and a couple of the grown ups rushed to see what happened. Because we all heard your screaming. When we came into your room...it was on fire. It was caused by you. I mean Aidan. He was screaming something about protecting you and how I couldn't. He looked like he was about to do something but passed out.We thought it was just a trick,about Aidan. Until we saw these marks. The bites and scratches. No human or animal could ever do those. But while you were asleep,we saw that you were healing quickly. We knew now that you have two parts of you. One you can't control..."...
A week later: They remade my room and gave me new toys. I thought a lot about what Reed had said. I also convinced Aidan to work with us. It wasn't easy. But after I told him that if he does this. It might help protect me, he agreed instantly. 7 years later: I hit the target dead in the middle. "Yes!" I said excitedly "That a girl! Team work!" Aidan cried in victory. I giggled. Reed clapped his hands "Looks like you and Aidan are getting this done well." He said with that warm smile of his. "Yeah, I mean we agreed that I should be the leader. You know since its my body." I stated as I grabbed my bottle water. "Now you guys just have to work on switching forms." Reed told me. "I rather do it later. You remember last time.. ." Last time had not gone so well. Aidan got a little too excited. Nearly burnt down the lab. "Well at least work on your sparring?" He insisted. I shrugged. Reed had become like a father and always worried. Because one day he knew I'd have to leave. "I guess." I said with another shrug. Reed lead me to the sparring room. " We have a new person to help with training. We heard there was something interesting about him. He certainly has a way with sparring." Reed explained. When we reached the room I saw a boy. He was nicely built black hair. I couldn't see color of his eyes . Blue maybe? He turned to me and laughed a little. " I thought I would be training this so called "Fox". The boy said. "Well I'm that fox hun." I said sweetly. "You gotta be Kidd..."he started to say but I grabbed his hand and flipped him on his back. "Never underestimate girls." I said helping him up. He smiled and nodded. We both grabbed a stick (or you can call it a wooden sword but who says that now a days?) And begin to spar. I dodge a couple of his hits or deflected them. But then Aidan distracted me. "...River." He said. I looked at him only for a second before I got flipped and pinned to the ground. "Ow!" I looked up and saw his eyes. I stared into them.They were green..these eyes I've seen and looked at before....I remembered this boy instantly...it was Tim..
Eh not really its not two souls inside its a demon. The story changes I'm not gonna go to the desert or anything? plus its a fox girl
You can' just say oh hey this is like this. Because I can name many stories that are like the last of us. Just because they have the same name? What if someone made a story that had a name Haley. She is strong and stupid. She changes the world. Then I'm another story there is a girl name Hailey. She's strong but very smart and nice. She changes someone life. You just can't be like oh! She like Haley in the other story!
Sorry. I just meant that, if it is like the plot of Beyond Two Souls, I would enjoy the story, since I like Beyond Two Souls and other stories/games like that as well.
No no no! They aren't similar just because of the name. They are similar in the case that the main character has another being attached to them, that everyone thinks they're making it up, that things are trying to hurt the main character, that the father dislikes the main character, that together the main character and the other being must go through tests at a sort of hospital/ lab, etc. It wasn't just because of the name. I was just saying one thing there.