This is a fanasty story. And yes, I know everyone HATES those but I'm posting anyway. I do what I want This story has a bit of creature stuff mixed into it but don't judge. I will probably make more so be prepared. Thanks if you read the entire thing and sorry if it seems too long. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Becky was a calm and quiet Mage. Nobody ever heard her raise her voice or get mad. They saw her annoyed, but never mad. But one time in the middle of a raging war between the light and dark army she turned into a beast. The dark king raised his sword, about to kill the light king that was on the ground. But suddenly a red figure ran from the darkness and took the hit. His name was Darren and he fell on the ground as the sword pierced him. "Oh. The knight came to try and save his king." The dark king sneered. "You... Will... Die..." The knight coughed out as medics immediately ran to heal him. The dark king raised his sword once more but a purple shape darted from the shadows. "NO!" The figure shouted and kicked the dark king away across the battle field and everyone ran out of the way. Everyone gasped seeing Becky with her cloak hood down looking furious. "So now the Mage decides to come out. Ya know. We are alike, very much indeed." Said the dark king. "We are NOT alike!" Becky shouted and ran. Dark knights ran to protect their king. Becky hit the face of one, catching on fire as Becky's hand suddenly caught on fire. She kicked another one that came near her. The dark knight hissed and shielded himself with his sword. Becky pressed her hands against the sword and it melted, hitting the knight. She turned and looked at the dark king. "I have to admit, you got moves kid." Said the dark king. Becky dashed to the dark king. "NO!" Shouted Darren as a knife pierced Becky's side and she slided and fell down. Medics stopping and pulling him back. Becky barley heard the shouts from Darren. She felt like giving up now. "So. That's it? Oh well. I guess Darren and the other are going to die today." Said the monster inside her head Becky tried to get up. But after a few tries she finally got up and everyone gasped and the king turned around. Becky looked down. Her hands in fists. Flames came out of her hands. "There is only ONE thing we have in common. We. Are. Both. MONSTERS!" Becky dashed and held up the dark king by the throat. She threw him and and floated up in the air, raw magic forming in between her hands growing bigger and bigger. "EVERYONE! TAKE COVER!" Shouted the light king. Everyone screamed and ran for cover as Becky released the magic and all she could hear was the bloodcurdling scream from the dark king. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Are you INSANE?" Asked Darren as Becky woke up on the hospital bed. "No. I'm a monster."
I just wanted to post my ideas and hear people's opinions on it. And I don't care if you think it's bad I will still post more.
Nobody pays attention to fan fiction and I want to hear people opinions on this. Opinions to people that actually read it. I'll take it to another website I just want your opinions. Is it really that bad?
If you want to hear opinions, but will refuse negative ones, obviously you don't want opinions... You want compliments.