How it started...... Earth is one of the few planets left that still sustained life. For years, all the planets lived in peace....... Until the Trogians started taking worlds for their own. So far they've managed to take over most of the planets in their system. Now, Earth is their new target. Under the United Earth (UE) program, we trained our troops for a war nobody could prevent..... Then, it happened. The invasion on the moon took everyone by surprise, in retaliation the UE sent troops into the moon. (Big Mistake) the Trogians were just waiting for us. By the time the UE decided to withdraw from the moon, we lost hundreds of thousands of men. Although the UE thought everyone had been evacuated, there were a bunch of companies that had been left behind, and forgotten....... Should I continue???
Yes but add a little more detail please... I feel that you are rushing with your story.. Write ten pages, I don't care... Make every sentence worth it
Kk Matt - 16 yrs old, recently joined the UE and was sent out. 5'6, brown hair, hazel eyes, althletic build, tan, quick and agile, fast think, thinks strategically and logically, good sense of humor, sarcastic, sometimes a bit cowardly, strong will to live. Let me know if you need more info.
Wow your perfect... I did this story for my English assigent and one of the characters is exactly like you
Chapter 1 Journal entry #46 Those damn Trogians got Tommy from Easy company. I kinda liked that son of a (*BEEP*) Our guys just keep getting taken out, the Trogians however just keep coming. Why did the UE have to forget us? They just left without even...... "Sir?" light poured in as the opening of the tent opened. "Uhh. The Sarge needs you. He said it was urgent." A man in his mid twenties stood up. He was a young fellow, but had the face of a hardened veteran. He had a scar that reached across his face, and seemed to tuck itself away into the mans hair. Scarface was the name. Almost every one had a nickname in the company. "Ok private, carry on" said Scarface. As Scarface walked through their encampment, he thought of the battle that took place here just 4 days ago. As soon as scarface walked in, he was bombarded with Sergeant Savages famous vocabulary. The Sarge, his real name being Matt, was a boy with potential. His family was rich, he had the looks. But most of all, he was smart. He had graduated from Harvard when the invasion of the moon happened. Instead of being a lawyer, he joined the United Earth Space Marines (UESP) . So here we are about to listen to Savage and his never-ending vocabulary. "so the way I see it Scar, if our predicament remains the same, we're bound to run out of resources sooner than we thought. And if my calculations are correct, we're liable to cease to exist!" Scarface took all this in and said "Dammit Savage! How many times do I have to tell you, speak in a language we all understand!"Savage seemed a bit agitated and said "You want language you dumba**** understand? Fine! We're all gonna DIE because our food is almost gone!" There was a long pause. But before Scarface could answer, there was a loud explosion and the tent flew away......
Ambush!! ........Scarface and Savage looked at each other, unable to make a move. But a second explosion brought them back to life. "Get that squad outa there!" "Somebody get on the damn gattling gun!" Scarface was desperately trying to give orders while keeping his men calm. "Doc Trump! What are the casualties?" asked scarface. "Uhhh we got 2 down and 4 needing medical attention." Scarface nearly cried when he heard of 2 more dead soldiers. "Ok, get those 4 into the cafeteria, and tell Doc Howard to get his a** over here." "Yes sir!" replied Doc Trump. "Savage!" Scarface cried out. In the distance a man could be seen running across whizzing bullets. "Hehehe, why do you run so gay Sarge?" Chuckled Scarface. "Un fricking believable, here we are getting our asses kicked and your laughing at how I run?" said Savage in disbelief and shock. "Hey, a good leader always makes jokes." replied Scarface. Savage seemed very agitated "Where the f*** did you read that? The "How to get your soldiers killed" handbook?" yelled Savage. "Uhhh never mind that. I need you to get cannonball and his crew on the east entrance. Just keep firing like there's no tomorrow ok?" "Fine. But I'm telling everyone what you said about my running after this." said Savage defiantly. "Ok, whatever you say" chuckled Scarface. But after a while, the Trogians began to leave. Which left the Space Marines shocked. "Snake! Get over here!" Snake was the company's scout. He made a living stealing from the rich, and keeping it for himself. That is until he stole from the Dictator of Trondheim. So he lived on the run ever since. No one really knows how or why he got into the UESP, but he sure is a damn good scout. "What?" said Snake lazily. "Go catch up with the Trogians, and try to find out why they left." "Whatever you say, you're the boss." Replied Snake. The next Chapter: The Hostage