 Born Breaking Rules 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_NicoleTheShortie_ (01), Jun 22, 2011.

  1. Much better with the italics 
     
  2. cant wait for more!
     
  3. Part Three

    Gabby left Matt and Elise to talk about the "Big Mission". How do they think they can pull this off? What if someone gets hurt?, she thought. Her mind was racing as she thought about the dangers. But she was smart. And with the help of Ryan, they could hack the computers and get out. Away from the white walls and white clothes i've worn so long , she thought. But she knew that they're was one problem. Getting ryan to help. She quickly walked to the Recreation Room where she spotted Ryan in the back talking to a guy she'd vaguely remembered. She walked up to him. "Hey!", he said, smiling hughly at her. "Hey. Can i talk to you?", Gabby asked quietly. "Sure",Ryan said, unsure if wanted to or not. Gabby pulled Ryan hand, pulling him into a empty room beside the Rec Room. "Did we come here to make out", Ryan said, grinning. "No.", Gabby replied keeping her voice even. Oh God. I wish we were , She thought, picturing the idea. Ryan frowned. "I need a hugh favor from you.", Gabby said, looking Ryan dead in the eyes. "Sure. What is it?", He asked curious. "Well....me and Elise and Matt are going to break out of here and i need you to help me with the tech stuff", She said. Ryan looked nervous then he sighed. "Ok! Fine.", He said at last. Gabby gasped. "OH THANKS!", She exclaimed, quickly kissing Ryan on the lips. Shock crossed her face as well as Ryan's. "Oh my gosh! I'm so sorry!", she said fumbling. "Hey. It's ok.", Ryan said, his beautiful eyes full force on Gabby. And before she knew it, He was kissing her and for once in her life.......she felt love.
     
  4. Young love...

    Great!!!!! Nice job Nicole!!! Oh and BTW can I be on? :D lol
     
  5. Aww she's in love! :roll: Erm excuse my cynicism. Lol
     
  6. Hey check out Love At First Sight :) i just started and I could use some advice
     
  7. Part Four


    Gabby walked grimly to Elise's cell. What the hell was i thinking? , She thought. Even though she felt nothing but happiness. She looked up. Cell 301 , it read. She knocked timidly. Elise opened the door, poking her face out of the door. "What is it?",she asked harahly. Gabby ingorned it as she knew that Elise had her "times". "I need to talk to you!", Gabby said, her voice raising. Elise opened the door and let her in. Gabby told her about Ryan and the thing that happened in the empty room. The whole time Elise grinned. "YES! I knew he would join us! Plus we found two other girls who want out of this dump!",she said, after Gabby was done. "Two more people?", Gabby asked. "Yeah. One's name is Jess and the other's name is Viv.", she explained. Gabby looked around nervously. "I don't know", she said. Elise sat down next to her. Her green eyes seemed so wise, they looked as if the belong to someone one million years old. "We're gonna get out of here. We're gonna be ok.", she said,smiling sweetly. And they hugged each other because they knew that though this might not be true, something good was sure to come out of this.
     
  8. :0 MOARMOARMOARMOAR *spazzes out...throws a chair* ._.
     
  9.  More!!!
     
  10. -pulls covers half way over face...- 
     
  11. *throws a lamp at a random wall* WOOT WOOT!! MORE!!! ^.^

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  12.  u dam ravers. I'll post moar later
     
  13. *gets impatient and throws office supplies at puppies*  ._. MOOAAARRR