Synthia dusted the vase and eyed her Boss, Jhon. She pulled the short maid's skirt up a bit and walke r over to him. She ran the feather duster across his head and pretended to concentrate on the desk beside him. The Stevenson's were amazing people, but Mr. Jhon Stevenson outshines his wife and son. Slick, black hair with a tustle in the front, blue glistening eyes, broad shoulders and a deep, rich voice made Jhon irresistable. His wife, with her busty figure, dull brown eyes, stringy blonde hair, and rude personality didn't deserve him. She used his money, cussed him out, and treated him like dirt. Their child was just a horrible as Mrs. Stevenson. He had white-blonde hair, blue eyes, and a chubby little body. He looked adorable, but he was a seven year old idiot. He broke his toys, whined about the smallest things, and didn't appreciate anything that was done for him. Nobody deserved Jhon. Nobody, that is, except me.
I wanna be in it ....if it's no trouble for you. I know how hard it is to add in characters an try to make them fit
No offense... I don't think this will be very good. It sounds like a really sleazy/slutty story. -Ryan
I agree with Ryan. Also, your vocabulary seems to be limited. Might want to add to that. But it just seem skanky. Just a thought.
Never once did I bash your story. Not once. Ryan, get over yourself. I apologised, idk if u read it, but I apologised. If u didn't like it, then u didn't have to read it or comment on it. Kaylee. Ryan. GTFO OFF MY THREAD!! Like I said, you don't like it, don't fuccin read it.
I didnt bash it in anyway so chill out. This has nothing to do with what you said to me Jess. I just don't think a story about a skank will work. Sue me for an opinion jeez.
I...okay, I just said it was skanky. Never said wether I thought that was good or bad. My stories can be skanky as well. Chill out and don't pounce all over me. I appreciate that you don't bash my stories. I'm trying to help by saying widen the vocabulary.
CAN YOU READ RYAN?! You said u didn't think the story would work, that's bashing!! DIDN'T I JUST TELL YA'LL TO GTFO MY THREAD!!! Kaylee don't try to fuccin play it off. 'I agree with Ryan' What kindve sht is that? LIKE I SAID! YOU DONT LOKE IT, DONT READ OR COMMENT ON IT!!! Now stay the fucc off my thread.
You're being really childish Jess. It was just criticism. If you act like that in the real world you will go nowhere. I'm not going to argue on your thread. I said my opinion so I'm done posting. -Ryan
In ToU it says that if I'm brought in the subject, I'm allowed to comment. I said "I agree with Ryan" then said how I thought it was skanky. Meaning I agreed with that part. Sorry if you didn't understand that. I'm curious to see where you go with this tho Sorry. I shall leave now if I really upset you that much.
Yes you are. I allow critism, but the whole 'This story isn't goin far. It's sleezy an skanky' and then u going right behind him and saying 'yes I agree' FYI, you can refuse this all u want, but y'all wouldt hve said any of this if the whole thing on Kaylee's story or on Ryan's thread wodve never happened. Now how many times do u har to say this?? GTFO MY THREAD!!!
Synthia watched as Jhon walked out of the front door. She looked around at the white decor and sighed. Donni, Jhon's son, ran past her, scraping his truck across her thighs as he did. She scowled and cursed under her breath. Synthia had already finished her chores for the day, so she walked around the house, viewing the uninteresting items that mocked her day by day. She rustled her dirty blonde hair and fiddled with her mascara smudged eyelids. She could hear Addison, Jhon's wife, yelling at Donni. Synthia rolled her eyes and headed towards Addison's thundering voice.
Ryan_horning or whatever your name is....thanks SO much!!! That's my freaking character, and she's supposed to be slutty it depicts modern adultry of the new age!! It's no happy story so GET OVER IT!!!