The Wizard World: The Dream(Part One)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iLulu, Oct 15, 2014.

  1. Long ago, there was a war between humans and wizards. No one knows how exactly it happened. The wizards were in training school, until a solider came to their world and started a bomb at a training school. It was a suicidal mission and hundreds of wizards were injured. The wizards didn't die they just weren't fully trained and couldn't heal properly at the moment. That's why they were in training schools. It was in the year of 390 during this bombing event. No one in the wizard world could ever thought that the humans would actually have access to their world or even bother trying to enter into their world; they didn't think that the humans had the ability to do that.
     
  2. The higher council were trying to figure out what was going on and why are the humans attacking them. The bomb happened in one of the big cities, Devenvorden. The higher council is trying to figure out who was the suspect. The wizards can still find out who was the suspect if they were trained enough to do that. In the wizard government, there is fifthteen council not members, but council. The wizards have a lot of council. Gray is the highest council, RruRru is the second highest council, Druha, Rhino(spells like an animal's name Rhino, but you can say it without the h.) Reho, Drones and Devines are the middle council. The middle council calls them, "Spies" because they spy on them for the highest council. Barento and Ry work on their own; Ry tends to have projects. Ry's projects are classified, which means no one else in any other council or any other wizard knows about the projects that Ry does. Dariena is the council that works for the first time and or currently working is in Loey; Loey isthe largest council ever created . The current king is in the council Zie and he is working with the elder council member, Dahan. Dahan and the king is discussing about the bombing in Devenvorden. They're not sure what to do with the bombing incident in Devenvorden. Grua and RruRru aren't doing well to fix the problem, so instead of them fixing the problem they've decided to have a debate about it; it's all over the news. Zie and Ry are too impatient to wait for an answer; they don't want a debate but rather action. Senity council members were too afraid to get involved. Loey's council members wanted revenge; the wizards who currently have a job went on strike, but the employed workers didn't care about their jobs, anyway. Loey's council members were no longer part of the council in the wizard government; they were just an ordinary wizard, but with powers and without a job. Zie and Ry complained about how long it was taking to take action and fight back; they decided to pair up with Loey. Within a month, Lory had made an announcement about the war; they will be getting revenge regardless of what others had to say about it. During the war, Ry makes an announcement about them leaving the middle class long who and they work for no one now, but they work with Lost during war times. The other council members questioned why Ry decided to leave the middle class in the middle of the war. Zie took action and bombed the famous cities, states and countries in the human world. China was the first country that they targeted, then England, then India, and then they decided to finally hit the United States of America. The United States retaliated and their soldiers went into the Wizard World to get their revenge. A war had started; a year had passed and the wizard king, Ronnie (his name) head was beheaded. His son, Zyri beheaded one of the soldier's head; he actually did a lot more than just beheaded the head. He sliced his arms off, cut his heart out, and sliced his legs. That soldier was a leader to the humans. All of the wizards marched down to the bridge that is between them and the river. It was a funeral, the King's body went first and the body was in a wooden boat with swords on the sides to honor his bravery. His wife shot a stick with fire on it then shot stick into the air; his son threw more than one fire sticks onto the
    water. The rest if the wizards did the same, but with other bodies. The other bodies are the wizards who fought in the war or died during the bombing incident. The wife ordered the guards to out up a long, big rock between their world and the human world.....
     
  3. This is like an introductory to my story. I basically just told you what happened, not the actual story. The introductory is like a history background. Just a little background to describe my story's history. Should I continue on with the actual story? Anyone interested yet? I'll take all of the feedbacks as an advice. For example, if I had any grammar mistakes or miss-spellings or if I put my commas in the wrong place, etc.
     
  4. I would be interested in the story. Your grammar looks fine to me. 
     
  5. LOVED IT 
     
  6. Murr thanks Murr & Josh. I'll keep writing, but later. Too lazy right now. Lol
     
  7. A couple misspellings but nonetheless it was great. Original idea and a creative plot to it, keep on writing