This was like made by me for many years... Hope you like the new story. There will be new names and more excitement. This story's genre is: Romance. Cuz duh. LOVE. Summary of first few chapters: A girl, named Blythe gets her scholarship in one prestige school where she falls in-love with two different boys who loves her back. When she finally picks one, it was too late, the one she loved already cheated on her.
Proulouge: Tranferee! I woke up, my brunette hair scattered allover my bed. "Hairfall..Gosh," I said. I got up then brushed my teeth in a small spot, I washed my face then got my worn-out tanktop and short shorts on. My phone began too ring. Dear Blyhte Allison Rain, We galdly announce that you are one of the exam passers of 2014, School starts in 7:05 sharp, tommorow, Tuesday. Sincerely yours, Mr. Edwin Williams I was speechless. I was accepted to Jeffrey High. "Mom! I'm packing my things!" I screamed. "Why?" She replied. "I was accepted!" I said. "To that crappy school?" She asked. " No mom! Not to Millikanies School! To Jefferey High!" I replied. "Yay! I'll make you a Grand breakfast of two eggs and bacon." She said. -:-:-:- I was not that normal rich girl, I was poor grew up working for myself, My mom had a bad sickness which doctors did not identify. She died leaving my dad, my sister and me. My dad married another girl leavong us behind having his own family. We were alone, I felt very shy before my classmates. I was left out, I felt not needed.
Can I just ask something? You put her mum was alive in the dialogue, "Mom! I'm packing my things!" I screamed. "Why?" She replied. "I was accepted!" I said. "To that crappy school?" She asked. " No mom! Not to Millikanies School! To Jefferey High!" I replied. "Yay! I'll make you a Grand breakfast of two eggs and bacon." She said. Yet, when you go ti description, she's dead and the woman her dad married didn't like her and her sister so their dad and her left the pair on their own... I was not that normal rich girl, I was poor grew up working for myself, My mom had a bad sickness which doctors did not identify. She died leaving my dad, my sister and me. My dad married another girl leavong us behind having his own family. So which part is actually right as you contradicted yourself...