PROLOGUE: December 24th 1995 11:58pm It was a snowy December night. The soft glow of the streetlights made the snowy ground sparkle, all was quiet. A sudden scream pierced the night. Two shadowed figures ran as they were chased by a tall man. One of them held a small bundle in their arms. They ran through the streets until they disappeared around a corner. Their pursuer stopped and looked for them, but to no avail. He quietly spoke into a walkie-talkie. "Sir I've lost them". Another more sinister voice crackled on the other end, "Did they have the child?"."Yes sir," the tall man answered, "And the medallion"."You have failed me the last time Mongrolé," the voice hissed," And now you must face the consequences". Suddenly a net trapped the tall man, and all went black... TO BE CONTINUED...
Interesting... Can I be in? Name: Dan Description: Messy black hair, short, tan, skinny, dark shades, black t-shirt, basketball shorts, black DC sneakers, crooked grin, backwards baseball cap, when I don't have my shades on I have dark brown eyes Personality: Out-going, positive, serious when needed, loud, funny, tough Qualities: Ninja, doctor skills, loves science, good in fights, hacking and codes, smart I am ninja.
It's good I'd wanna be in but I suck at describing Ah screw it, lemme try: Name: Otto Malpense Age:16 Personality: funny at times (yeah I have my moments) serious when needs to be. Kicks ass with a sword. Can use elemental sorcery(if you write about magic) extremely smart(evil genius A's a matter of fact) :twisted: Wears: black coat, with a hood. Coat moves with the shadows. Black pants. Appearance: white hair, blue-green eyes. Muscles.
present day I was late for school, again. Apparently turning off somebody's alarm clock is a great end of school present according to my brother. I quickly jumped out of bed and put my uniform on. I pulled a brush through my red hair a few times and then tied it in a ponytail. I picked up all my books and ran out the door. Danny was already there waiting. "You're late." He said as I hopped into his car. "Wow I didn't realize." I stupidly retorted. Never get into a battle of wits with Danny, he's like a ninja with words. I hastily tried to change the subject. "You know Principal Wilks is totally gonna kill you when she sees what you've done with your uniform." And she would, he didn't have his shirt tucked in and he had drawn a whole bunch of stars and circles on his pants. I'm not one to judge though, the last time I tucked in my shirt was the first day I came to the school 2 years ago. "Yeah well it's not like she can do anything about it," Danny said "it's the last day of school. And it's not like you're following dress code either." "To much make-up again?" "It's like I'm talking to a clown." I punched him in the arm and then took his soda. Seriously if we didn't "argue" then we probably wouldn't hang out. "So why were you late?" Danny asked. "Rex again." "Seriously shouldn't you think about getting a lock for your door?" "You think I haven't?" We went on talking like that for the rest of the car ride to school. Finally Danny parked in the same car spot and we started walking to the school doors. Suddenly Stacy Winthrop popped up in front of us. Ugh. Stacy Winthrop is a perfect little golden haired school queen. She could walk into the school in a bikini and Principal Wilks wouldn't even care. But it was funny to watch her hit on Danny. She was almost 6 feet tall, while Danny was barely 5' 9". Just as she was about to use some cheesy flirting technique on Danny the bell rang. Ugh. The only thing worse then Stacy Winthrop is our end of the year math test.
I think it's good so far I lik the main character and Danny's relationship. It's cute yet funny. Keep writing please