Radiant

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -----------------------------i, Jul 12, 2014.

  1. I woke up woth the sunlight striking to my face. I got up to the shelf and poured some milk into a silver plated glass. I rushed down and got my uniform. I wore my slightly faded black shoes. I ran outside and got the keys of my Toyota Jazz.

    "Nothing smells more good than my aircorn" I whispered.

    I drived in the empty lot when I saw a guy in a skateboard.

    "Hey you! Move out" I shouted.

    As he look towards me and remobve his hat revealing his bright blonde hair.

    "Sorry, Miss" He shouted.

    "Why is there only few kind guys in the world?" I whispered as I slip myself inside.

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    Sorry no names yet but I will name them now:
    Jake: A rich guy who is in to sassy girls.. But he likes girls who are humble too..

    Allie: A teen girl who was left with her aunt and uncle who definitely does not care for her. she has a miserable life... Will Jake make her life better or worse?

    Macey: A sassy girl who has a relationship because of "company stuff". She is a rich girl, She is spoiled and hates Allie.

    Raymond: Allie's bestfriend/ secret admirer, Allie and him was friends since birth, but Allie never tought of Raymond liking her.

    Here is the main characthers but more will be added along the story! Hope you like the First part.
     
  2. Update! Please! ? Wall me when ya do
     
  3. Hmm. Wall me when you update :3
     
  4. As I park the car, I stood up and locked the car. I rushed open the door.

    "Gosh, Im late..." I worry.

    I walk to the door when I sit down in a sit beside the window. I gaze upon the city. I accidentally started daydreaming.

    "Miss Jones, Please offer some of your attention." My teacher says while softly shakes me.

    I focused myself when I heared a slight giggle from the seat behind my back.

    "Ah! Sorry...." I say.

    "Mhm! May I continue?" Professor Yellow said.

    "Yes, Sorry" I apologize.

    "As the routine in this school's first day, we would like to introduce each other's name, But by partners." He said.

    "What?!?!?" We shout.

    "That too simple? Then after your say the names of your partner infront." He announce.

    We scatter around, Some partners themselves with their friends, some cousins, some with relationships. I gaze around the room seeing no more girls. I tried to sit down, when professor drags some boy to me. I somehow resemble his face.

    "You again?!?!? Of all the.." H eshout

    "Faster! Why not introduce your names?" Professor said.
     
  5. AMAYZING
     
  6. Hmm. Wall me when updated please :3
     
  7. As I walk towards him my heart was bumping, as I reach my hands towards him.

    "Mhm.. This is introducing of names not french kissing!" he shouted.

    As I woke up from the daydream, hearing everyone laughing.

    "Sorry, I tought you were..... R... Ronaldo?" I said.

    "Ronaldo is a gay...." He told me while pointing at him.

    I walk outside the classroom while going into the empty lot filled with bright yellow daffodills.
    As I hear a rustling sound running towards me.

    "Who is there?" I said.

    Until I see a guy which is quite tall.

    "Why are you here? My ex....." He said.

    "Oh! Sorry to disturb by the way, Im Valiah!" I said while reach his hand towards him.

    "Kaito, Some call me hiro." He said while turning away from my hand.

    "Gosh! So snobber." I whispered to myself.

    "I can hear you. You big mouthed geese." He said with a smirk in his face.

    "You look cute with a smirk, you should wear that everytime." I preferred.

    "Dont tell me what to do." He said.

    "So, how do you run that fast?" I asked.

    "Joining racing team." He said.

    "Oh! Hiro the best runner!" I said.

    "So, see you later." He said while waving his hand goodbye.

    I walked down to the corridors to the room. I nevermind any one gossiping. So I waited until the bell rang and rushed out the terrace.

    "Hey! Hiro!" I waved at him

    "Hey!" He said

    A pack of girls surround him and started fangirling. But he took pictures with them and asked them to go away. As he walks down, I saw him touching his head like his hurt.

    "Hiro!" I try to reach him when I realized I slipped an fell. He ran towards me and catched me.

    "Oof!" We both said.

    "Hiro!" As I hear a cracking sound.

    I stood up and helped him.

    "I just had a headache." He said

    "Oops.." I said.
     
  8. Hmm, I was slightly confused at one point but that's probably because I just woke up xD but I'm liking it. :3 wall me when updated again
     
  9. Wall me when you update again! :p
     
  10. I obviously drived him to the hospital.

    "You drived me here to get me checked on?" He asked.

    "Yes...Maybe," I answered.

    "Shit! I might miss Biology," He shouted.

    "I excused sir," I explained.

    "Thanks, Why do you care about me anyways?" He asks.

    "Because I like you-" I reply.

    "What?" He asks.

    "As a friend, Silly," I say.

    The doctor gave him a cast and laid it on his shoulders.

    "Your good to go, but don't play any sports," The doctor said.

    "But-" He says.

    "No buts, prevent any physical activities," The doctor replies.

    We went out and talked on our way home.

    "So... Do you like anyone?" I ask.

    "Actually I have a girlfriend," He replies.

    I stayed quiet on our way. I did not move after the answer, I just looked at him time to time making sure he was fine. I was waiting him to talk and change the topic.

    "So, how about you?" he asks.

    "Still waiting for 'the one'," I answer.
     
  11. Ohhh interesting! Wall me when ya update 0.0 •~• plz
     
  12. Bump! Go on.
     
  13. While we were continue to walk someone then bumps me. It was Raymond my bestfriend, I looked at his impressions when his fists met Hiro's face.

    "Allie! This bastard is behind you," He shouts.

    "Raymond! He is my friend," I explain.

    "But that bitch," He says.

    "He is not a B nor a Bastard!" I scream.

    "But He was holding on your hips," He said.

    "He got injured, stop thinking like your my boyfriend," I said while I help Hiro to stand up.

    "Thanks, He is a good friend huh?" Hiro says.

    "But he just punched you, is it nice?" I reply.

    "He just needs to stop jumping to conclusions, but as of now he is good as a friend," He says.

    "He is "social unstable", He can't control his temper," I said while thinking if that was even a word.

    "No, Im fine. Get injured everytime in racing," He explains.

    We continue walking and talking until we arrived home.
     
  14. Wall me when updated please •-•
     
  15. Update Bump bump bump