Paradise Lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by AaronRodgers, May 26, 2011.

  1. NOOO
     
  2. *starts walking away from u forever*
     
  3. Justin was infront of it's face, it roars... "Bro... Two words... Tic... Tac..." and it chucks Justin back towards the ground... Erics heart seemed to stop (even though it's not really pumping) and everything stopped... Justin was in mid air, so he ran at him and jumped up to grab him, as soon as he touched him everything became normal once again. Justin was still screaming like a little girl. Eric grins. "Let's kill this b*tch" Justin was pissed.
    Alex comes up, he's climbing up the creature and slashing at it, it was so large that skin had stretch marks and Alex was slicing them open. After he does this to the entire right leg, the creature flings him off, but Alex landed safely. The creature stumbled, then fell at Bellas feet. She smiled and stabbed it in the eye. She pushed her entire arm through towards the brain (but it didn't have one) and then violently ripped out. It was dead... Everyone was admiring the creature... It had tough skin, so we made shields and light armor out of it, doing this would add even more protection. They kept marching... They would soon smite the king of hell...
     
  4. I don't scream like a little girl
     
  5. Yes you do Justin 
     
  6. What happened to my epic entrance?
     
  7. You're a slave that's all I can say
     
  8. AWESOME!!!!! Where we at? Lol
     
  9. With the war most cities and Demon barracks have either been destroyed or take over, so in the struggle to keep hell, The King has ordered slaves to build and build.

    Legend was dragging a giant piece of rock... This was gonna contribute to damming the river of blood.... As he walked he thought about how he could get out... How he could join the resistance and fight back. As he approached the dam, two demons were whipping a new slave, he has dropped his chuck of rock off a cliff. Legend let go of the rope that was helping him pull the rock and attacked the guards. He pushed one into the dark red river and used a small shovel to kill the other. He pushed the body into the river, not bothering with the weapons. He looked at the man. "So what's your name friend?" the man looked up, into Legends eyes and mumbled something. "What was that?" He stopped, backed up, and looked at Legend. "My name..... Is Danzo...."

    The door bell rang, Shelby rose to answer it, leaving Charlie with Eric. Bun and Blizz were at the door. "Hey guys! Long time no see...." they entered... They looked grim. "We've got bad news..." Bun looked at Charlie. Shelby sits down next to him and grabs his hand. "Which is?" Charlie looked worried. "Danzo died... He was shot... But the killing was too professional, we have reason to believe that we're being targeted...."
     
  10. YAY you incorporated what happened in Naruto!!! Now I'm dead in both stories!!!

    Nice Damien!!!
     
  11. The Undead Army stops on the outskirts of a building site. They were building a dam... Eric looked at the mass construction project and saw men and women being whipped. An archer spots them and opens fire. Bella cuts the arrow in half before it can hit Eric in the face, then a resistance soldier threw a knife at him and killed the archer. More archers approach, and then a large 4 armed demon approaches "You all better turn back now! Or i will kill you!" he looked serious... And scary, but sounded stupid. Justin walks forward "let me deal with him..." he approaches the demon (which is the site Comander) and stabs him 6 times in the chest with his knife "we're going through" and all the archers drop dead, but not from the resistance. Eric looked up and saw the cloaked man, but this time everyone saw him... Everyone was whispering.

    "Ok well if this is true we need to start sticking together... Change identities... Move across the world... We have to avoid this assassin... Or assassins." Charlie was pacing... Eric was asleep in his room and Shelby was sitting on the couch. Do you think the guy that had Justin and Eric killed is responsible?" Charlie had to defend Shelby and Eric... He had to do it for his friend. "Possibly... But we may need to enlist help from the police, they could help defend us." Blizz spoke this, almost more to himself. Shelby started crying. "I dont want Eric to grow up without us, he-"
    "Shelby... The assassin will kill Eric too... That I can promise." Shelby cried more.