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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -DDD_AccidentallyMe-, Nov 25, 2012.

  1. In an English class once, we were asked to write a poem on what happened when the coal fell onto the local junior school in Aberfan, Wales. This isn't the poem I wrote then, however it carries the similar message. I hope you guys enjoy it...

    Coal Mountain

    The black mountain is still there,
    Unmoveable and daunting.

    It has always been behind school,
    It's presence making my classroom haunting.

    I giggle with my friends as I walk in,
    Not knowing it would be the last time.

    The school bell rang in our ears as we walked past,
    And our first lesson was about rhyme.

    I had to get out of the class,
    Natural causes called me.

    Where I had to go was near the entrance,
    Away from where I needed to be.

    There was no warning when the mountain started breaking,
    Just classrooms suffocating.

    I was paralyzed when I saw it coming,
    I could do nothing.

    It covered me in a layer of black,
    Turning white into grey.

    I tried to move within the small pile,
    Hoping to reach the light of day.

    A hand grabbed mine,
    And said it will be okay.

    It pulled me out of there,
    Like I was a lump of clay.

    Fear still controlling my body,
    I couldn't take a step.

    They placed me on a stretcher,
    And carried me out as I slept.

    Then I heard your tears mother,
    Causing me to open my eyes.

    From what I can see,
    You thought I wouldn't be alive.

    We have another one,
    Was called out meaning myself.

    I have never seen such a crowd meaning,
    I wasn't going to be left on a shelf.

    You didn't come over,
    So I ran to you instead.

    Your tears of pain turned into happiness,
    As later, I was going to be at home in bed.

    You lifted me into your arms,
    Together we watched my friends.

    More and more tears flowed from my eyes,
    When I saw them and realised they had met their end.

    That day is engraved on my memory,
    Never leaving my mind.

    All because I needed the toilet,
    I wasn't one of the bodies left behind.

    Now, I, Rebecca, am Aberfan's lucky girl,
    As I survived the landslide of The coal mountain.
     
  2. That's a great poem!  Um...is it weird that I kind of happen to like those pairings better than the original ones?  Not the Spongebob ones just the Harry and Draco and Kim and Shego~  They just have so much better chemistry!!  #FABERRYFORLIFE
     
  3. Also about the smut thing, I usually see the ratings before I click on the stories~ 
     
  4. Although I don't read FanFictions of them, I mean I think I read a couple before but that's about it. No my FanFiction heart is specifically saved for Faberry~ -Sigh-
     
  5. Never ever search for Bellatrix and Hermione Fan fictions... EVER.
     
  6. Oh yeah I heard that was a thing, when I saw that as a pairing on some of my Faberry FanFiction Writers I was like, "That's a ship?  Why?"  But I heard they can be pretty steamy~ 
     
  7. Is this where all writers come to converse? I'm a little new to the game and this topic in the forums.
     
  8. Yeah, it's called fan fiction but no one really writes them… mainly original stories.
     
  9. *appears out of shadows*

    Welcome. We're all mad here.


    *disappears back into shadows*
     
  10. Oh that's exciting!
     
  11. Shush Brooke no one is meant to know
    (/-0) (/-\)
     
  12. ~ Oh! If you guys want the Hermione and Malfoy one, type:

    Love Thy Enemy Wattpad

    ~ Into Google, Wattpad is the app it's on, but you can read it from the website  like I said, it's actually a really good story.
     
  13. Just wondering, where are you guys all from?
     
  14. Texas~ 

    Welcome FloweryRedHead to our humble abode! I am your hostess (even though I don't act like it but we'll just keep that little tidbit between us yeah?) I hope you enjoy your stay at The Writer's Café. Sit down and relax! 