Sean's Poetic Page

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MadKingSean, Aug 10, 2014.

  1. Well to Sean's Poetic page (or SPP for short..sounds funny actually xD)! Please, enjoy your smelves! Kick back, have a drink (or sip for you less aggressive drinkers xD), and enjoy some original poems by yours truly! And if you wanna post, just ask me and go ahead!

    Please keep it original though folks! I hate non-creative shits -.- xD! Once again, enjoy!
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    Savior by MKS:
    My heart was shattered,
    my mind disformed,
    my emotions rattled.

    I was on the bring of insanity,
    because all of humanity,
    dumped its weight on me.

    Before you walked in the door,
    I could have swore,
    even Me and myself, didn't greet I.

    But in comes an Angel,
    who's weight was like mine,
    but the Angel herself,
    seemed too heavenly and Divine.

    And that Angel was you,
    the Savior I adore.
    Because my soul would have been cast away,
    hadn't u walked through my life's door.
     
  2. Criticism and desires for more will be accepted :p I got plenty yall xD like seriously :0
     
  3. Second stanza, line 4:

    Brink* not bring. Sorry bout that xD
     
  4. Ooooohhhh nice
     
  5. Post more baby ?? All your poems are great
     
  6. I will post more lol
     
  7. I like it :) it's a little less depressing than the stuff I do, but it reminds me of how much my boyfriend has helped me through some crap and how he's changed me for the better.
     
  8. That's really cute.
     
  9. Thank you thank you