Scary Short Stories. "Drinking water"

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Fume, Aug 9, 2014.

  1. This thread will host a multiple of my own creations of scary short stories. If you are to enjoy them then please post saying continue for the next story. Thank you and enjoy.

    **Disclaimer** If you are to be scared by these stories please refer to me for social advice.

    "Drinking water"
    There was a little girl who lived in an apartment building. One day, she told her mother she was going out to play with her friends. Hours later, when the girl’s mother went down to call her in for dinner, she realized that her daughter was nowhere to be found.

    The mother asked all of the kids who lived in the apartment building if they had seen her daughter. They all told her they hadn’t seen the little girl all day. The awful realization sank in. The little girl was missing.

    The girl’s parents called the police and a search of the surrounding area was launched. All of the other parents in the apartment building joined in the search, but it was fruitless. In the end, the little girl was never found.

    Three months later, the residents of the apartment complex began to complain about their drinking water supply. Whenever they turned on the water taps in their apartments, they noticed a strange odor.

    Gradually, the apartment manager started to receive more and more complaints from the residents about the taste and smell of their water. He decided that something had to be done and told the janitor to test the water in the storage tanks on the roof.

    The janitor went up on the roof and began removing the lids from the tanks and checking the chemical content of the water. When he got to the last tank, he lifted the lid and was hit with an overpowering stench. Gazing down into the murky depths, he was able to make out something floating in the water. It was the decomposing body of a child.

    After the police conducted an autopsy, they were able to confirm that it was the corpse of the little girl who had gone missing three months before.

    It seemed that she had been playing on the roof when the lid of the water storage tank was temporarily removed. Apparently, she looked into the tank and must have accidentally fallen into the water and drowned.

    The girl’s corpse lay there, undisturbed, for three whole months.

    And for three whole months, the inhabitants of the apartment had unknowingly been drinking the water that the little girl’s decomposing corpse was floating in.
     
  2. This is amazing! Please do more!!!!
     
  3. I feel like I have read this somewhere but A for effort. I'd like to see what other ones you have. Also I don't know if I'd call this scary, disturbing is the word you might be looking for.
     
  4. Credit to my friend who helped me come up with this idea and write it.

    I will post more in a while.
     
  5. I also suggest you give real credit not to "your friend". The orgin wasn't hard to find but I'll leave that to you. I'm tell you this here because you blocked me for trying to help you out.
     
  6. I agree with Flower. I looked at your wall and she was giving some kind advice. This story isn't very original at all. I suggest that you do give an origin the next time you or your "so called pal" [who I don't think exists but is an excuse] decide to take credit where it is not due.
     
  7. Flower you had me blocked when I tried to message you stupid girl...
     
  8. Well obviously. I blocked you a while ago because you respond like a child to everything. The only one who is stupid is you.
     
  9. Continue please -3-
     
  10. First of all, no arguing or u will get banned. Second amazing but plz but more gorey stuff and more mysteries.
     
  11. Flower please stop with your lies and nonsense we have had this situation before.

    Don't return or ever post on my threads again, you are banned from doing so.
     
  12. As for the next story I will post it today.
     
  13. That's happened at a hotel near where i live but it was an adult male... I think I've seen an NCIS episode with something like that in though...
     
  14. [​IMG]
    I can't help but give you proof that she is right that you are unoriginal. You were rude because it's true and I know what you're going to say. "You're banned!" I do not care. If that what makes you sleep better at night.
     
  15. No I'm just gonna say it is my friends account and it was based around a true story on a Japanese girl who died at a young age by falling into that water tank.
     
  16. It's slightly adapted from the previous.
     
  17. I hope you decide to give that girl an apology, as I can see she just trying to help you out because you were in the wrong.
     
  18. Anyways, here is the next.

    "Not so fine China"

    So when I was barely twenty years old I was travelling with a small group of people through China, and we were spending about two months in Qinghai province, which used to be part of Tibet. Our destinations was a specific town to teach English, but we'd been stopping often in towns and small cities along the way. One day we arrived in a rural town, very small, nothing unusual. We spent only a couple of days there, shopping for food at the markets and walking around to see the sights, although there weren't many. This was in the dead of winter, in February, and all the grass on the hills and plains around the town was dead and brown. The overall feeling was that of the normal kind of bleakness that any rural place has in the winter.

    At this time in my life things were going amazingly, extraordinarily well for me, and I say that because my teenagehood had been rather darkly overcast. But the overwhelming good luck of being able to travel and these close friends I'd made in the last year had more than changed my feelings and attitude towards life — it was like I was a whole new person. I was ecstatic to be in Tibet, went to sleep with a smile on my face every night.

    On our second day staying in this small town I woke up feeling a little odd. Not bad, just odd, like my normal thoughts and feelings had been turned down low, like on a dial. We all decided to go for a walk on the hills right behind the town, where there was a small summit with a pile of rocks and some prayer flags (to be honest there were little "altars" like these on every other hill, but it gave us something to do).

    As we hiked up the hills behind the town I started feeling stranger and stranger. I wasn't scared, and I didn't feel angry or any strong emotion. In fact, it was like emotion was trickling out of me somehow, and I was getting blanker and blanker, emptier and emptier. My mind started feeling a little hazy and more and more I felt like I simply didn't care about anything. A small and rapidly dwindling part of myself started to panic, knew that something bad was happening, but it was like my own inner voice was slowly getting quieter and quieter.

    I remember we reached the little summit and I simply sank to the ground next to the pile of rocks. Without meaning to, I started tuning out the voices around me and fixed all my attention on the little pebbles in the dirt. I began tapping one against the other, repeatedly. Do you know the kind of horror that is opposite of feeling scared or feeling anything at all? The kind of vacuous hideousness of a fly buzzing against a closed window for hours on end in an empty room? That's what was filling my mind. It was demonic in its meaninglessness.

    I touched my face and felt that I was grinning at nothing. Through all the emptiness a thought floated to the forefront of my mind: You should just die.

    At first it sounded totally reasonable, but something in me fought it and I was momentarily troubled. Right then, my group started to walk down from the hill, and I followed. The further we walked, the more normal I felt, until we left the town that afternoon and I was totally freaked out. When another girl, Hanna, mentioned in an odd off-hand way that she had felt very strange and depressed while staying there, I told her that I'd felt the same.

    When the group leader mentioned that a local had told him that the town had been plagued with a rash of young women under 25 committing suicide, Hanna and I went white.
     
  19. Continue please .-.
     
  20. Wow. And during the Writing Contest, you had the audacity to say I copied a story and yet here you are.  Life is funny that way.