After that exhausting day I finally slept with peace and no interruptions ------------------- The Next Day ------------------- I rushed down while I tied a bow over my neck. "Im late!" I screamed. I opened the door rapiddly and went inside the limo. "School..Faster!" I shouted. In a few minutes we stopped and I went out and ran to the room seeing Proffesor Blue. I went in. "So, You decided to even join us?" He asked. "Duh.. That is why Im here," I whispered to myself. "Ahem? Any reply," He asked. "Yes sir... I do," I said. I sat down on a seat near the window seeing the bright shine of the sun. "Miss Erendale!" He shouted. "OUT NOW!" He commanded. I ran outside seeing the driver putting up his eyebrows. "Just like your brother in his 1st day," He said. "Hmph... Atleast I get to be like him," I giggle. I go home while I gently go up the stairs when a man go out of the room. "Ahem?" He said. ------------------ UhOh!
One complaint. Think about it, a poor orphan, who has always been hated, suddenly joins the rich. I don't think she'd be used to it. It adds more meaning to character. If I had a character with this kind of back story, I'd make the character something like a girl who wouldn't be used to having luxuries. She wouldn't go around advertising her new parents, and she wouldn't be so used to calling them family. Maybe just by their names
"I was uh... yeah.," I explained whiled shaking. "So you got inlove with this guy and hanged with him too much that you got late for class?" He shouted. "Yes but-" I said. "No buts," He said and shut the door infront of me. "I wish I was back in the Orphanage,"
-Ooops posted sorry- "I wish I was back in the orphanage," I said. I stood up and went out the door pouting. "This place is more like a jail for me.. no fun.," I said. Aiden suddenly goes out of his room. "Meaning of Fun... Wanna go to da Beach?" He asked. "Now that's fun.... Who you with?" I ask. "Suzzane Collins.," He replied. "Ayieeeeee!"I tease. "No just friends... And you have been for 5 months.. And you have not meet her yet." He replies. We hop on a RV while listening to tunes. "This song is Limited Edition, only 5 CDs were sold," He said. "Celeb Advantages?" I ask. "Yep.. So lucky," He giggles. We finish up our ride with some Truth Or Dares. "So who your Celeb crush?" He asks. "Maybe... Ross Lynch.," I reply. "Had jamming with him one time." He replied. "Sorry to break the chatting but maybe we need to start Partying!" Someone says. We have all the swaying and the jumping when someone pulls me and drags me into a room. "So.. Aly Erendale?" She asks. "Suzanne Collins?" I ask. "Yes..," I reply. "Watch where you go at." She says when two girls tosses me back to the crowd. "Huh? Watch where you go at?" I whisper in my head suspiciously. ------- What is wrong with this :0
Then Marsiee heads down my way. "What she say, Gal?" She asked. "She said... watch where you go at,"I replied. "Maybe you might trip.. or fall," She said. "Trip...?" I asked suspicously. She went away then suddenly disappears in the crowd. Just then Aiden goes towards me. "So how is the party?" He asks. "I dont know.. How did Marsiee become a 'She'?" I ask. "Well it was along story," He explains. "I have 2 big ears....ready to listen," I reply. "Ok.., He was a son of a lutenant, he soon studied in a military school and he fought wars and other 'soldier' stuff. He then saw a girk which soon became his girlfriend, they soon broke up and Mark-" He says. "Mark was his name? So manly," I reply. "Yep, Mark soon got so depressed he tried to commit suicide but was stopped by my Mom, at first he hid his 'gayness' and soon told it to his dad. His dad was angry and was asked to leave the house,where she found the job of being makeup artist and soon got sucessful." He continues. "Wow,'She' is brave," I reply. "Yes, that is why Mom loves her," He says. "Yep.. a manly trait," I said. "Stop it!" He giggles.