[/size=170] Red's Love; Crimson Blood [/size] By Talitha Mead ((Georgie Summers [not on PIMD])) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It was silent now, the calm after the storm. It bled into the room like a sweet, noxious gas, permeating the moment, saturating it. A young teenager was knelt down, cradling a girl, her fragile beauty left in shattered pieces. He held her close, tenderly pressing his lips against hers, withdrawing to gaze at her fondly. He slowly licked the crimson stains left on his lips from the kiss before speaking softly. "Isn't this better?" He looked her over, his eyes roaming her body at a leisurely pace. Finally coming to rest on her face, his crimson eyes softened as he lovingly brushed a sticky strand of hair from her face, bending down once again to plant a kiss her face; leaving a red stain on the bruise blossoming under her skin. Looking down at her, the boy's face broke into a wide smile. "Thank you," he whispered, nuzzling into her tussled blond hair, "I knew you'd agree with me eventually." He wrapped his arms around her tighter, running his fingers through her hair, leaving red streaks through it. "I love you," he murmured softly. "I really love you, Jordyn." The boy's head jerked up suddenly at the distant sound of frantic footsteps echoing down the hallway. He gazed down in horror at the carnage that lay before him. "No!" He choked. "I didn't mean this! I didn't mean for it to end like this!" He whipped round as the door flew open, people flooding into the room as if from an unblocked leak, his perfect moment draining away to leave a bloodied and battered corpse in his arms. He scrambled unsteadily to his feet, desperately clutching his beautiful, beautiful corpse close. "No," he pleaded, his voice strangled. "Please don't take her away from me. Please don't take her away." He flinched away from a scientist as he came near, and the man held his hands up in surrender. "Easy, easy there," he hastily reassured the unstable teenager. "I just want to see her..." The man edged closer, closer. Too close. He felt the needle bite his skin before numbness washed over him like a wave... (To Be Continued...) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Comments are much appreciated along with feedback and some constructive criticism. All comments/suggestions will be SS'd and forwarded to the author . Thanks ️!
I really like the description in this.️ It's a great start, and I'd like to read the next part. Good job!
Thanks for the comment Angel, I'll pass it on to the author The next part will come maybe in a few days or after some more comments.
Short but sweet part 2 of 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ He collapsed down, his precious Jordyn being washed away, out of his arms, out of his reach. "No!" He cried, struggling wildly. "Don't take her away from me! I didn't want it to end like this!" His vision was fading, red darkening to black as he fell away into the void. "I never meant for it to end like this..." (The End)