Poems

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by EXP0SEDWEAVE, Jul 14, 2014.

  1. Okay I like this poem and I was wondering if you have any poems that you like too ?
    It isn't deep but it's inspirational
    Here it goes 
    Me no study
    Me no care
    Me go marry
    A billionaire
    If he die
    Me no cry
    Me go marry
    another guy

    ? If you don't like it then tell me one that you do like so I can judge it like the way you judged the poem that you like ??
     
  2. It was beautiful.
     
  3. My end of the sentence doesn't make sense ? Try to understand ignorant for me ?

    I mean as
    - if you don't like my poem then tell me the poem that you like so I can judge it the way that you judged mine ??
     
  4. This is great 
     
  5. Retaliation
    We must fight
    For our rights
    Come back strong
    We've done nothing wrong
    Retaliation


    Poem by a bored person 
     
  6. ? Woah I'm surprise someone answer on my post

    ? meaning I don't have to get a cat 
     
  7. Gam3r that's deep man ?️ Way deep ?
     
  8. AND ya great poem ;P
     
  9. Ya I'm into strong poems  but there's nothing wring with funny ones I just can't do funny poems
     
  10. ? My poem was funny? Holy nipples it was supposed to be inspirational ?
     
  11. Wait... how haha
     
  12.  It influences on good choices duh 
     
  13. Ahh I see now you've shown me the truth lol xD
     
  14. Is this open mic time?

    Dolls are pretty
    Dolls are nice
    Dolls can see you
    With their glass eyes

    Dolls wont move
    When you're there
    But dolls will follow
    You everywhere

    Dolls dont talk
    But when they do
    That doll will forever
    Be with you

    Yay I made a poem 
     
  15. Sounds more like the poem of a player.....but what am I to judge about the poem op chose
     
  16. Within my heart a garden grows,
    wild with violets and fragrant rose.
    Bright daffodils lime the narrow path,
    my footsteps silent as I pass.

    Sweet tulips nod their heads in rest,
    I kneel in prayer to seek God's best.
    For round my garden a fence stands firm,
    to guard my heart so I can learn.

    Who should enter, and who should wait,
    on the other side of my locked gate.
    I clasp the key around my neck,
    And wonder if the time is yet.

    If I unlocked the gate today, would you enter or run away?
     
  17. Too serious????