My sadistic poem.

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Alan, Jul 4, 2014.

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  1. Enjoy guys. #4DaRude2Sandstorm0

    Feeling all blue, I’ve got no more time. They all hate me because of my crime.

    Their threats come at me. Their voices are loud. All to condemn me. My face is still proud.

    You were my friend. I saved you before. I thought you turned good now, but you asked for some more.

    You had to provoke me so I beat you. Watched your skull bleed so now I feel blue.

    Out of ideas, nowhere to run. Looking right down, barrel of a gun.

    And so I dream. Voices in my head. Delusions mock me. My best friend is dead.

    I feel no guilt, but I shed a tear. I see your dead body with the blood all smeared.

    A bird sings a song. It’s all for you. Outside it’s so warm and the skies are all blue.
     
    #1 Alan, Jul 4, 2014
  2. I never thought I would see Darude - Sandstorm in PIMD forums.
     
    #2 Turtwig, Jul 4, 2014
  3. Cool kk
     
    #3 -IN-ToEatingPie-, Jul 4, 2014
  4. i see right through you
     
    #4 Sadistic_The-BAD-ly_Influenced, Jul 4, 2014
  5. this is..can't even
     
    #5 GrimmBlackDog, Jul 4, 2014
  6. HOLY POTATO. ME LIKEY.
    Surprisingly literal, and a nice contrast to usually metaphorical poems.
     
    #6 Nicewife, Jul 4, 2014
  7. Nice poem. Awesome, awesome.
     
    #7 TachyonParticle, Jul 4, 2014
  8. Thanks for the feedback guys :)
     
    #8 Alan, Jul 4, 2014
  9. You must be ugly
     
    #9 Snorkels, Jul 4, 2014
  10. Its ok @Wesk. I don't care. Now please, Leave my post.
     
    #10 Alan, Jul 4, 2014
  11. I like the poem though...
     
    #11 Snorkels, Jul 4, 2014
  12. lol. nice trolling west you two faced little *****. i dont think your arm can extend far eenough to take a selfie of you wwith your ego.

    as for this poem. brilliant. youre awesome.
     
    #12 TrippinOnAcid, Jul 4, 2014
  13. Thanks, it's funy how that's coming from a troller.
     
    #13 Snorkels, Jul 4, 2014
  14. :-o
     
    #14 CalvinHarris, Jul 4, 2014
  15. Roses are red
    Violets aren't blue
    OP I have a question
    Who did you mug to make that absolute poo?
     
    #15 IIIlIIlIlIlIlIIllIllIlIIllIlII, Jul 4, 2014
  16. No one. Just my mind from my imagination of my ex ^^* ,
     
    #16 Alan, Jul 5, 2014
  17. ^ im a troll because you make a crap thread due to your ignorance and i start dancing on yyour face bruh
     
    #17 TrippinOnAcid, Jul 5, 2014
  18. Wow, awesome poem :) i agree with forever, Wesk's ego is too big for his own good -_-
     
    #18 donutdealer, Jul 5, 2014
  19. Wesk, get out, you don't know how to troll




    ?
     
    #19 Rachrooo, Jul 5, 2014
  20. I actually kinda like this ?

    West ego is so big, when he steps on the scales it comes up "one at a time please"
     
    #20 -Until_TheAshesOfEden_Fall-, Jul 5, 2014
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