Here's a little story I've wrote, tell me how you like it and some constructive criticism please! Thanks for reading ~~~~<~~ Dylan's Pov It's my first day at Lincoln Heights, I hate transferring to new schools. My first class is Chemistry in Mr. Coopers room, who ever that is. When I enter in greeted by an awkward silence and staring faces. You can literally hear the sound of my beat up shoes as I walk, that's how quiet it is. I had the handsome and oddly muscular teacher my schedule. As he greets me to the rest of the class he smiles at me and directs me to sit behind of a perky blonde. The lonely dimple in his cheek is absolutely adorable, I guess this school might not be so bad after all. Zane's Pov I honestly could not keep my eyes off her from the moment she walked in and out. The way her beautiful long curly read hair lay on her chest made me wonder how it would look all over my white bed sheets. Her small frame was simply perfect, who knew such a short girl could be so....no Zane you can not think of your students like that. I can't wait till tomorrow morning.
Since not much has happened so far, I don't have an opinion of it yet.? The only thing I have to say so far is to not make it a cliche teacher student romance story and if the age gap gets too big it's kind of really weird.?️ Keep going!
Update! Can you add me in for more "Color" Name: Aly Hair: Blondish brown Personality: Rich but kind Additionals: Dylan's Friend