This is a book I'm writing its not my best chapter the other ones at better but I wanted people's opinions and I wanted to see if by those people's opinions I might make it better. I would like it a lot if I had an opinion on it I will update this weekly.? Artemis woke up one morning laying on the couch not knowing where she was or how she got here. She heard someone coming and hid, she heard them coming from the cracking floors and their footsteps. One of them said loudly,"I told you already she might be a good member of the pack." The other said"I know but she might be too weak to and maybe not strong enough for them" They look at the couch and speaks angrily"Where did she go?" Artemis breaths deeply hoping they don't find her. She hears footsteps coming close she stays as stiff as a rock and shuts her eyes scared to death. One of them goes close and spots her. "She's over here Aaron" One of them speaks looking at her almost laughing seeing her scared. Aaron comes close and sees her. Artemis opens her eyes looking at both of them. "Please don't hurt me I don't know how I got here or where I am." She breaths deeply terrified in what might happen to her. They both look at her oddly at her reaction and they both look at them and try to calm her down. "We are not going to hurt you we just wanted to make you part of our group" Aaron grins with his white teeth showing bright "Ya what Aaron said.... We just want you in part of our group" "I don't know what you are talking about I don't want to be part of any group I'm just a 14 year old girl and if this is some type of drug thing I'm out" Artemis turns away going to the door when she feels a hand holding her back. "Haha we are not part of a drug group or anything we will have to show you but you will have to trust us." He let's go and looks at her. "Why do you think I should trust you I don't know where I am and how I got here so I need some answers now" She folds her hand looking at both of them. "Huh. You are in a cabin in the woods and you are here because Chris over there found you laying in the ground yesterday with your parents dead by your side" They both look at her wondering what she might say when they spread the word about her parents. "What?!? That can't be. They can't be dead how did they die?" A tear comes down her cheek as she leans against a wall then Chris goes to comfort her. "It'll be ok I promise you" Chris puts his arms around Artemis then she looks at him confused, scared, and angry. As she speaks they can hear that she's scared"Th-th-they can't be dead!" She goes down to where her legs reached her chest and she hides her face in between crying. She starts whispering "They can't be dead". Chris looks at Aaron then they both look at Artemis, after they see she calmed down a little Chris says "I'm sorry for your loss." They all stay silent for a moment. "But... If you need anything just ask." "What's your group about?" Artemis takes her head out and looks at both Aaron and Chris as they look at her thinking about what they might say not trying to scare her. Aaron sighs and finally speaks "might as well tell you now... We are a pack... Have you ever believed in werewolves?" Aaron looks at her waiting for an answer. Artemis looks up and looks at Aaron "Yes Why"She answered quickly after she heard the word werewolf. Aaron swallowed hard scared to speak and finally he answered her question but as he speakers he looked down embarrassed."Because we are a pack of werewolf." When Artemis said that she stood up and looked at him with wide eyes. "OH MY GOD! I can't believe it my dad was right he wasn't the only werewolf in this city" Artemis spoke in excitement. Chris looked at her happily and spoke in a serious voice"So your a werewolf too?"He looked at her smiling and got up waiting for an answer. Artemis looked down with a frown"I'm not a werewolf only my father was" She looked at Chris "Is your whole pack werewolves?" "We are all werewolves and we can turn you into one if you join our pack we can show you around if you like?" Chris looks back at Artemis with a smile showing care and love about her. "I'd like that but I'm not sure about the whole being a werewolf thing won't it be painful to become one?" Artemis smiled at Chris and rubbed her arm as she thought about being a werewolf. "It's will be painful but it will stop after the transformation is done and after that it won't even hurt." Aaron spoke in a clear voice looking at both Chris and Artemis. "Chris do you mind showing her around?"
Chapter 2 ? Hope y'all like it ? "Not at all." As he answered he looked at Artemis smiling. Artemis smiles back"Let's go then we'll start with the cabins." He looked around"this is the first cabin and we have 2 more on the side of this one. Follow me and I'll show you around." Chris heads out and Artemis follows him. As they walk through the woods Artemis looks around without saying a word and finally after a while she has the courage to say something. "Are there any rules for the pack." She looked at Chris. Chris looks back at her "We only have two rules, one is that you should never talk to anyone outside of the pack or any other pack, and two is that you should never tell anyone about the pack." He looks at her seriously. "One more thing...everyone thinks that you are dead...but the only people that don't think that are the people in our pack." "So everyone thinks I'm dead?" She looks at Chris in a sad face but then brightens up."Ok I get all the rules. What's next?" "Next we are going to meet the pack."He starts walking a bit faster as Artemis follows and gets to a camp site about the middle of woods. Everyone looks at her and the first person she catches sight of is a tall guy with dark blue eyes, a tan colored skin and dark blonde spiky hair in the middle saying "Hi" to everyone. "Chris what if they don't want me in this pack?" She looked at Chris worried. Chris looked back at her"It'll be fine everyone is friendly they don't bite or anything." He talked with a smile in his face almost laughing. Artemis nodded nervously as she looked at everyone. Artemis saw the cute guy looking at her and she looked away quickly and looked at Chris." What do you do here normally?" She smiled at Chris and say the guy look away. "Well we normally just hangover at the campfire sing songs and go swimming... Most of us take this as a vacation for a life time we all have a lot of fun here. We also have our enemies but we normally don't talk about them. C'mon let's go show you your room in the cabin." Chris leaves as Artemis follows him in a cabin. "Wow this place is amazing" Artemis looks around smiling." Where is my room going to be?" "Every cabin has four rooms and each room has four beds and it's pretty big you'll have roommates" He goes into a room in the middle of a hallway and opens the door. "Hi!" A girl pops up out of the door looking at Artemis happily. Artemis looks at her, her hair is bright red with curls she's tan green eyes and tall. "Hi" Artemis replies smiling lightly. "Artemis this is going to be your room that's Cindy and Cindy this is Artemis" Chris introduces them "and over there is Alex my little sister" Artemis looked at Alex she's a tall girl with short black hair, tan, and bright green eyes. "Hey Cindy and Alex" Artemis waved smiling. "Hi Artemis" Alex spoke in a serous voice but a nice and sensitive voice. "Well I should leave...and Artemis if you need help ask me" He said goodbye to all of them and left them. Artemis comes in smiling"I've already liked everyone here" She looks in the room. "Haha! Yup! That's how I felt when I first joined!" Cindy spoke in a cheerful voice. "You can choose any of those to beds over there" Alex points to two beds in the other side of the room. "Ok I'll take that one" Artemis points to the one on top. "Ok and we have new clothes if you need some since I think you where found in the woods...and it hasn't been used" Alex explains everything to her about the time they normally wake up eat go hunting." Well that's it" She looks at a clock "it's getting late we are going to miss the hunting want to join us?" She looks at Artemis "I can't I'm not a werewolf" Aaron said that they were going to turn me into one put I don't know when" Artemis rubs her arm. "Ok the you can just stay here and look around or go for a walk in the wood" She smiled and went outside to the living room "Ok thanks for everything Alex and Cindy" She looked at both of them leave smiling. "Oh one more thing... When we get back I'll show you everyone I. The pack." Cindy Shouted out loudly from the living room. A few hours later Artemis is sitting in the couch watching a movie. "We are back!" Cindy burst out coming in. Artemis almost jumps up "Hi" She looked over at Cindy. "Have you eaten" she looks at Artemis and then over at the kitchen. "Ya I just found things in the fridge and made something" She looks at the kitchen all cleaned and nice. "Ok! Let's go show you the pack!" Artemis gets up and follows Cindy as she goes outside whit Alex following behind them. They get to the campsite and meet everyone "Okies we are here" Cindy goes in the middle and gets a chair. "Attention Everyone!!" She screamed out and she got her attention. "I want you all to meet my friend Artemis..." Artemis stood there feeling nervous and couldn't move. "Artemis c'mon you don't have to be shy." Alex dragged her to the middle where Cindy was and just stood there looking at everyone."Artemis say something"Artemis just stood there feeling embarrassed and ran if deep into the woods.