The Greatest Friends

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Victoria__Fairy, Jun 14, 2014.

  1. I know the story is kidda kiddush so if you don't like it too bad so sad.

    Late in the afternoon there was a little girl. She had imaginary friends, and her parents hope that this "fase" will go through soon. The neighbors were coming to the little girl's house to have dinner with her parents. The little girl was in the corner whispering and Ms. Willis her next door neighbor said, "Who are you talking to?" The girl didn't respon. Ms. Willis was growing inpatient, she grabbed the girl's shoulder. Her eyes were rolled into the back of her head. Ms. Willis called 911. The girl went to the hospital and the doctor couldn't help her. The girl's father was going mental over the years. He was so mad that he would hit the girl. One day when he started hitting her, some kind of force was stopping him.
    Now three months has past the girl was in a mental hospital, because supernatural things were happening to the people who kept her. No one wanted her . No one talked to her. She died at the age of 16, because she committed suicide.
    To be continue
    Tell me how you like it.
     
  2. No support
     
  3. Hmmm…mmm………hmm…

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    FeartheBear
     
  4. Make something original for people!
     
  5. I think, there's a movie like this.




    Hhnm
     
  6. Why was the little girl late that afternoon?
     
  7. Is "fase" supposed to be "phase"?
     
  8. When she "didnt respon" was she speaking Ebonics?
     
  9. When she grew "inpatient" was she an actual hospital "in patient" or was she just "impatient"?
     
  10. Horrible story yo.
     
  11. Sounds okay but need more detail and it's kind of all over the place but keep at it . Would read it
     
  12. ★ did you read the forum guide by Hermes ? 