Episode 1: As I slowly walk unto the hallway I suddenly bumped a strange tall guy. He asked me my hand but he just removed me and made me fall. "Uhh!" I slowly say when I try to get my books back to my bag. "Hahahaha? Alina? The new girl in Empire High? Ha! Back off!" He loudly laugh. "Yes, Alina! Emman?" I slowly put my hands to you. "oh, oh, oh! No handy hand shakes with you!" He laughs. I began to stand up and walked slowly to my classroom. "That guy was cold and also ho...." I slowly said that when the door banged to the wall. "Huh?..." I unconsciously ask. "Its the school's celebrity! EMMAN!" Emma Whispers slowly. Then suddenly a group of fan girls scream like they saw a ghost. "YOU AGAIN?!?!?!" He shouted while staring at me. LIKE EPISODE 1? COMMENT FOR EPISODE 2
its nice though i dont understand sometimes who's talking and not. Keep writing aly.. i bet this is a goid story: *
"Yes me again!" I shouted. Then the teacher rushed in. "GOOD MORNING CLASS!" He shouted like a general in Army School. "Good morning Prof. Lance!" He slowly taught us algebra. Our class suddenly chanted. " 5,4,3,2,1!". Then our Prof. slept. The class started to cover the room windows with cardboard. I did not notice much cause I was doodling 'his' name in my book. he slowly peeked. "My name in your book?!? No no no no! We dont have same names right! Or do we?" He shouted. "He might be stupid sometimes." I whispered. "Come with me" He pulled me out then we ran down the stairs then jumped somewhere most of 'Emman's Gang' hang out. "Here!" His face slowly came to mine. I closed my eyes. He stopped then ran away. "You think i'll kiss someone like you? I'll rather die!" He shouted. "You Stupid Man!" I screamed. "He may be hot but too Stupid" I whispered while covering my face. I came back to the class room. Comment and Correct me if possible!
Nice but i dont really get it can give us some of the background of the characters?then might be easier to understand
Alina- Ordinary Girl who fell inlove with Emman Emman- He was a famous and rich man who will somehow realize her love For Alina Ariana- the mean fiancee of Emman (Chose by his parents and will be shown in a few episodes) Tyler- Someone who likes Alina too (will be shown in a few episodes) Anson- Emman's brother (Shown rarely) Emma- Alina's frenemy Prof. Lance- The teacher who falls asleep all the time AND A FEW MORE SUPRISE CARACTHERS!
Episode 3- Come home! I went home after that long school day. I came back when tears fell from my eyes. I kneeled on the road. "Why?!? Mom?!?" I asked loudly. Then someone riding a Maserati stopped at my back. "Hey you whoever your there comeout you almost bumped do you know what in the world happened to me?" I shouted. Emman slowly opened the door. "Oh its you." he said. "Yes its me! Our house was burned ,happy?" I crazily replied. "Oh, excuse me?" Her mom said. "Oh sorry madam." I shyly said. "Your house was burned? Oh how tradgic! Live in our house! Come ride we will just text your father." She happily said. "Ok! Fun! How Fun!" I lauged suspicously. Comment!
AsI ride the car, Anson, Emman's Brother talk to much about..... everything! Yeah! And He was Like Oooh! Anson Said. Emman tries to stop him, so Anson stopped. Were here! Whippie! His wonderful mother said. So I went down and examined the house from the chandelier to the floor. Your house is gigantic! I said. Her mother rushed out the car then went inside too. Alina, Come with me, do you see the Play room? go left, you will see the 3rd floor stair, go up then you'll see a room with pink design, enter it then settle down. We'll give you dinner just use the telephone to call Chef Darwin. He will give you the food. I go to the room then lie down at the bed. Best day evah! Ahhhhhhhh! I screm Then Emman rushes in. Why? Why did you shout? Did anyone hit you? He asks worrily. I cover my mouth. Then giggles. Nothing...... Sorry. I said while blushing. You always disturb everyone! Just shut up! He shouted. He went back to his room. I cried. Disturb to everyone? Hmph! I whispered Shortest chapter ever!