The grammar in the first one was terrible. I have recently gat myself well acquinted with two teen musicians, one of them is not very sociable but the other one is a real darling. We usually juat talk about life, mine expecially, cause she likes helping her fans. Today we started talking about music, and when i told her about my music experience she told me to take a chance and get discoverd. I tried arguing but she persisted on and on until i gave in. Then she wrote this among many other things I'm posting this cause I have not made a decision yet, because honestly i'm not that good. So guys leave your opinions please. Ps- i will not reveal the identities of either girl, if you won't believe my story so be it, I really have nothing to prove Apologies for bb fails and grammar errors.
Congrats Jor, go for what you love. btw, I dont see the point in correcting someones spelling when they obviously worked hard on the thread.