Horror Times Issue #1

Discussion in 'Strategy' started by COOKlEMONSTER, May 3, 2014.

  1.  Hello everyone, I will be posting horror stories every now and then just for your reading pleasure  Thankyou if you support me 


    Tittle : The Dead Body

    A MAN and woman went to Las Vegas for their honeymoon, and checked into a suite at a hotel. When they got to their room they both detected a bad odor. The husband called down to the front desk and asked to speak to the manager.
    He explained that the room smelled very bad and they would like another suite. The manager apologized and told the man that they were all booked because of a convention. He offered to send them to a restaurant of their choice for lunch compliments of the hotel, and said he was going to send a maid up to their room to clean and to try and get rid of the odor.

    After a nice lunch the couple went back to their room. When they walked in they could both still smell the horrible odor. Again the husband called the front desk and told the manager that the room still smelled really bad.

    The manager told the man that they would try and find a suite at another hotel. He called every hotel on the strip, but every hotel was sold out because of the convention. The manager told the couple that they couldn't find them a room anywhere, but they would try and clean the room again. The couple wanted to see the sights and do a little gambling anyway, so they said they would give them two hours to clean and then they would be back.

    When the couple had left, the manager and all of the housekeeping staff went to the room to try and find what was making it smell so bad. They searched the entire suite found nothing, so the maids changed the sheets, changed the towels, took down the curtains and put new ones up, cleaned the carpet, and cleaned the suite again using the strongest cleaning products they had.

    The couple came back two hours later to find the room still had a bad odor. The husband was so angry at this point, he decided to find whatever this smell was himself. So he started tearing the entire suite apart.

    As he pulled the top mattress off the box spring of the bed he found a dead body of a woman.
     
  2. Not bad is there gonna be a part2?
     
  3. Um… okay? Why would you hide a dead body there? Wouldn't you want to dispose of the evidence?
     
  4. Oo nice. What happens.next?

    Fallenangel, why do u have questions. Enjoy the story.
     
  5. I was just wondering. Whoever murdered that person must've been pretty dumb.
     
  6. Ohhh this story is exciting. Arrg post the part2 already. Wall me if ever 
     
  7. Yea it's wierd hiding the body and only the man can smell tge bad odor ik it's a good story buy it need to imagine to to make real good but it's... uk nvm. XD
     
  8. My eyes hurt^

    Still i couldn't read that.
     
  9. I kinda lol'd at the end. It's like..... direct. Straight to the point. "There was a dead body there" idk feels too...... dry? Idk.

    Haha
     
  10. THIS DOESN'T BELONG IN STRATEGY SECTION
     
  11. I agree with Jopo, it was too direct to the point. I want some **** like "They were banging, when suddenly, a ****ing dead ***** jumped on them".
     
  12. ^ im was imigining it :lol:
     
  13. *heavy breathing
     
  14. Would be better of stories were real, that was pretty predictable