I don't search for attention, I look for people who need help. I'm not high, we are all on the same level. To crave blood, doesn't make you something freakish. The journey home is very slow, but it can always go by with company. To lose someone is to lose your heart. In order to become something more, you must lose your humanity. Animalistic senses cannot control humans. Humanity destroyed itself when it was born, but only small populations live due to those who haven't doomed themselves. But eventually it shall doom them
Bud,this is not a poetry site,if you are going to constantly post threads with only poems then you need to find one. Sorry but its the truth
Change some commas to different lines and also your several" ..."s In one,you don't see it as a poem as you changed the format but in reality they are all poetic forms of trying to say something and not in a normal way. You really couldn't say its a question or a statement,maybe you could consider it worded as talking to yourself more than others I guess but it is not what forums wants to see. (If u expected something on this line here,your gonna be dissapointed?)
Everyone says I have no poetic justice and that I suck at poems, so it's not a poem as everyone is a poem nazi...
You can say your "high" but in reality, we are all on the same level...everyone is living their own fantasies...except for me and others...we can't live our fantasies, so we abuse ourselves in any manner possible, drugs, self harm, self judgement, losing control, and going insane. Nothing can change how we are, but at the same time, something can be done to make it happen less. It's hard but it's easy...hard on the victim, but easy on the person doing what is to be done. We must give back to those who cannot do things. Honestly, there is just no "high" or "low", there is no such thing as "broken" or "special" deep in, we are all the same. Now some of you are thinking "oh, so this autistic kid can speak for people" well...I'm not sure about if I am what I am...but I know I'm something else. Give, and get. The balance of the world is to give and get, if you can't give something fair, they take something that will be used as full pay. I have lost a lot...because I am unbalanced. I'm not balanced, but I am wise...so such words that cause commotion are not agreed on because I'm not even close to being anyone's favourite. I don't even know...how I'm able to write this...why...why am I writing it. Is it because some kind of equilibrium has been destroyed, and it affects me...if so, then I am gonna fight to repair that equilibrium
Poetry can be anything that's why it's poetry so yeah if he takes it as poetry then it itself is a poem.