Paradise Lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by AaronRodgers, May 26, 2011.

  1. "Hell?" Eric was confused... How could he be in hell. Eric knew why he was there... But he never knew it existed. "You little f*cker!!!" Justin attacked The Legend. "You just had to kill us!" he was punching the helpless assassin. "Cmon guys we need to work together... There has to be a way out... There has to be..." Eric looked around at his environment, infront of him he saw a giant creature... It had four arms and was tall, but had a flat-topped head. "Hey! Are you three new!" it pointed at them, it's voice was deep. A giant crowd comes out of a building, hiding the three. "Follow me.." the voice came from a woman, Eric sees it was a woman wearing a hooded cloak, Eric tells the others to follow and they do.

    The woman led them to a house, it was heavily damaged, but still standing. They walk in, it was nice to not see sh*t on the ground. The woman takes her hood off. "Hey guys!" she smiles at them. The woman was Sophie. Justins eyes go wide, he rushes forward and hugs her, and then kisses her on the cheek. Eric did the same, but Legend sat in the background, admiring his finger nails. "Who's that?" Sophie whispers this into Erics ear. "The guy that got us here..." Eric looks at her and smiles. They've been here for only 10 minutes. It was nice to see a friendly face. She's been here for almost 2 years, and yet she still looks the same. "So what was it like up there?" Sophie sat down on a battered sofa. "Oh, it's a long story.."
     
  2. Lol soon enough young padawan... Soon enough
     
  3. *post* where's the next update? 
     
  4. Tomorrow... Maybe same time
     
  5. Same time?That's awhile Away it's 10 pm were I am
     
  6. I know  ok... Tomorrow morning if I have time or tomorrow at 3 pm pacific time... Good enough?
     
  7. Nice!!!!!!
     
  8. Not here! Past 3!
     
  9. Sorry, I don't have enuf time
     
  10. Eric and Justin filled sophie in on everything that has happened recently. "Guys, I'm sorry..." Eric looked over at Lefend... "I'm just a lonely assassin! I had no idea that you had families..." What's weird is that Eric and Justin have never seen someone so sad about something they did. "Don't worry, we'll get out of here sooner or later.." sophie just looked at the three boys. There was a bang on the door, and then it was kicked in. Two of those giant flat headed monsters walk in. "You!" one of them points at Eric, "Run!" Sophie yelled this out and everyone ran in different directions. These creatures were but extremely stupid. They manage to get outside, but Eric slips and falls face first in a pile of crap, not being able to stop, he brushed some off and kept running, being crareful this time. Eric takes a left and runs straight into justin, heads knocking on one another. "DAMN!" Justin yelled out. Eric wipes more crap off his face. This time Justin and Eric walked with eachother... Just to stay safer.

    "OH MY GOD!!!" shelby was crying while Blizz was telling her about the three bodies In the forest, charlie comforted her. "Calm down... Calm down.. At least they arnt wanted anymore in heaven." shelby ccries more. "But who will watch out for my baby?" Charlie looks at her, "Did you just say baby!?!" he went pale
     
  11. I iz prego!!!!!!!??????
     
  12. BABY?!?!?!
     
  13. Amazing! So will I ever come back in the story?
     
  14. Chapter 2: The Living

    2 weeks passed since Eric and Justin died. The group of fugitives buried the bodies in the forest, even the unknown assassin. Life went on somewhat normally. An anomynus source told the police about eric and justins death, the two most wanted criminals in the USA. The person who received the tip was officer Kenzie. "Sir, we got a tip that Eric Rhodes and Justin Zimmer are dead." the lead detective that was working on capturing just looked into her face. The man had rough features, he was young. "Do you know where the bodies are?" he pulled out a small notebook and starts writing. "Uh, no... Apparently the source just said they're dead, killed by an assassin." the detective jotted down some notes and said, "Ok, try to find out any enemies of theirs, this may help narrow down the suspects." Kenzie nods and walks away.

    Blizz approaches Shelby. "I can watch over him, like his own father would." Shelby looked at him, she's known him for a while now. She nods at him. "Ok..."