Summer

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Believe_ (01), Apr 23, 2014.

  1. I sat on the bench in my yard, hoping for him to show. He promised that we could take, once school was out.

    "He isn't coming you know that, right?" My annoying sister said

    I groaned and rolled my eyes. "Don't judge him like that!"

    He slightly chuckled. "Sis, he is a player, meaning he doesn't care if he has a girlfriend, he'll go after other girls."

    I sighed, knowing she was telling the truth.
     
  2. Keep going 
     
  3. I stood up, looking off into the distance, checking if I could see his car. Nothing. I was stood up, like always.

    "He is so...urgh!" I yelled to the sky

    Someone laughed. "Who is this guy?"

    I turned around seeing Aiden Conners. He was the nerd of our highschool, either way he wS really nice.

    "Oh...uh it's nothing. Just rich girl problems." I said starting to develop tears

    He come through my gate. "Don't cry..he isn't worth it."
     
  4. I love the story
     
  5. [​IMG]

    Read this book
     
  6. What's it about
     
  7. I looked up at him, knowing he was right. "Yeah, you are right! He isn't"

    He slightly smiled, putting his hand on my shoulder. "That's a good girl"
     
  8. You might want to write more than a few sentences each update.
     
  9. Yeah, you kinda need to do longer updates