I don't think I should have to back up every single thing I say . However, when you post in the future I'll keep in mind you like to have backstory to the critiques. Also, don't stop writing. Ever. Please don't. And check out fan fiction. Post stuff there. So much RP. We're lonely.
Don't be nice if you can't, fuck it. If people don't like it they can go fuck themselves with a cactus or something.