The Mystery Adventure

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -MsChocoLatte-, May 21, 2011.

  1. Haha u have me as some phyco guy
     
  2. XD nice one Thizzle
     
  3. ... Spiders r scary
     
  4. A wink of my eyes,it's night already.So we camp where we are standing at.We all went to sleep soundly.When I was sleeping,I heard footsteps of three people.So I quietly wake Qin up.

    "What,what,what"Qin said tiredly.

    "I heard someone's footsteps"I said.

    "What the!"Qin said curiously

    "shh,it's coming."I said

    I close my eyes tight,I felt like being drag away.When I open my eyes I saw my 2 long lost brother and my dad.

    "OH MY HOLY GOD!!!!!"I said.

    "shh,please be quite we are taking you with us"Chris,Lil and Zuess(Bob) said

    "But those are my friend,I can't leave them alone." I said.

    Everyone was woke by the dragging sound......
     
  5. 
     
  6. *post* ok Zoey, I put my comment
     
  7. ninjas don't get dragged away.
     
  8. Qin:XD

    Jake: lol

    Danzo:lol
     
  9. I shall now lol.....LOL
     
  10. Plz add me in the story
     
  11. "What's going on?"nikki said.

    When they see clearly they saw me being drag by three men from the light to shadow.They tried to pull me back,pull,pull,pull,the three men let go off me and quickly fly off to the dark jungle.

    "Are you ok,zoey?"thizzle said.

    "Ummm.....ya,I'm fine...."I said.

    "is there something that you are keeping from us?a secret?"Jasmine asked.

    "umm....no...there's nothing...."I said.

    "ok everyone go back to sleep we need energy for tomorrow!"nikki said.

    Soon,everyone went back to sleep.I can't sleep the whole night,I felt some kind of sorrow in my heart...
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    sorry for my super duper late update if my story,I can't find this story so now I founded it and tried to update,I will continue write 

    or?
    Pls comment thanks ^_^
     
  12. you are so right it's super duper uper luper LATE
     
  13. P.S to everyone:You must read the whole story then u will know what I'm writing