Dirty Deeds Left Behind

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 31, 2011.

  1.  DONT GO WITH HIM 
     
  2. He will die if he doesn't 
     
  3. I don't care he shouldn't go 
     
  4. In the distance. The boy saw a figure standing on top of a building. Flames licked up around him. He wore all grey. A grey hood and grey clothes. Large grey wings broke from his back.

    He was shaking his head slowly.

    Suddenly the flames engulfed his image. And the hand on the boys shoulder tightened.

    "come."

    The boy turned to the man. He wore pitch black robes. His face was covered in crimson. And burnt. Ash blocked the boys vision.
     
  5. This is amazing.
     
  6. CANT YOU SEE?!
     
  7. I like it more plz xx
     
  8. The man held out his hand to the boy. Behind the boy, he'll still broke loose. The screams still shook the very ground.

    The screams still cracked the rock.
    The screams still etched in the boys head. The visions still drawn upon the boys face. And in his eyes. His Icey eyes. He had looked into hell he had see the death of the world. The death of life. The death of mercy. The death of innocence. He saw all this and he could do nothing but watch.

    He watched the blood rain. The blood flow. The bodies fly. The bodies burn. He saw the very world crumble. He saw babies and men alike slaughtered. He tasted the wicked. He tasted the blood. He tasted the dirty deeds of others. He smelt the fouls stench of evil. And the stench of burning flesh.

    Now this mans hand is brought out in offer. The man looks at the boy. His hand extended, "cone with me."
     
  9. OMG DON'T GO 
     
  10. The boy reached for the mans Han. And grasped it. For a split second he saw the grey man agian, standing behind the crimson man.

    The boy suddenly felt a surge of energy bursting through his body. Coming from the mans hand.
    The man smiled, "yes.."

    "remember."
    He whispered,
    "remember everything you've seen."
    "remember everything you've heard."
    "remember everything you've smelt."
    "remember everything you've tasted."

    The boy nodded silently.
    The man gave off a grin, "you carry the burden.."

    "the burden..."
    The boy repeated.

    "yes... The burden... The curse... The gift..."

    Thefires of the city were growing higher. Almost at the balcony.

    "never forget."
     
  11.  what's going on??
     
  12. Later on The man got the boy out of hell and brought him to a mountain. Where he taught the boy how to use his gift. His burden. But the man himself was not in control of his of burden. And just as he was lead astray he lead the boy astray.

    The two did unspeakable things...
    The boy had the power.. The gift..
    The man had the power... The gift.

    Yet they were astray...

    Twenty years later...

    The boy, now a young man. Walks the roads of a dusty village in the middle of nowhere. He wears a crimson cloak and a crimson hood covers his scarred face and Icey eyes. The scenes of that day he stared into oblivion still played themselves in his eyes and mind.

    With him he carried a walking stick.

    He saw people walk on the streets. Doing their everyday chores.
    "can't you see the bodies burning?"
    He said aloud.

    A old man loomed at him, "what?"

    The boy, the man, turned to the man. So close he stood that the old man could see into his Icey eyes, "can't you see?"

    The boy, the man, asked.

    "I've seen plenty!! When I was a soldie-"

    The boy, the man, spun around, blades in his hands that were hidden in his cloak now in his hands. The old man fell to the ground and his head then rolled off.

    The boy shook his head, "you do not see."
     
  13. 
     
  14. Suddenly the mans hand ice agian gripped the boys shoulder, "Yervok!"

    The boy, Yervok, turn to the man. "yes Tirj?"

    Tirj, the man, still wearing his pitch black cloak shook his head, "you killed that man.."

    Yervok nodded, "he did not see."

    Tirj squinted at the boy, "how do you know this? He was not doing what the non seeing do.."

    Yervok pointed at a war ratio on the mans naked arm, "rebel.. Against the old empire.. They do not see. He does not see."

    Tirj let go of gerbils shoulder, "good.."
     
  15. been to hell myself, 5* acomadation
     
  16. Yervok* not gerbils
     
  17. But kronoss... "you do not see" 
     
  18. Tirj saw It in Yervoks eye.

    Tirj grabbed Yervok, "come on.. It getting late."
    The two made their way to the mountain they resided in all these years. Yervok quickly made his way to a cave.

    Inside the cave he stared blankly at a wall. Itbwas pitch black yet he saw... He saw..

    He saw the flames....

    "WHY CAN'T YOU SEE!!!!"
    Yervok screamed, tears began pouring from his face. He slammed his head into the cave wall, cracking it.

    "SEE!!!!!!"

    He slammed it agian.

    He fell to his knees, tears as well as blood trickled off his chin.

    Suddenly all of Yervok lit aflame. A evil grin spread across Yervoks face... "SEE!!!!"
    He yelled.
    "see... See..."