There are different types of poetry. A normal poem itself usually rhymes and has a sort of rhythm. A prose poem doesn't rhyme, but still shows emotion. This one would be a prose
^^YES Agreed It is a prose but whats so bad about it,? Atleast he tried and thats well enough… Am sure that his other poems ought to be more awesome & moreover u can't score 100% in each test… If u guyz think that its a crap then post one of urs and then say…!!
PREPARE FOR AWESOMENESS. A poem by yours truly: Welcome to Party In my Dorm, Aka RP-Ville, These men with no game be using pickup lines like, "Does this rag smell like chloroform?" Others be wayy too serious, they need to pop a chill pill. You hit them once, and they be all furious, There's also the braggatory farmer, They hit you to make you cry, and when you do they be like, "Go cry to your mother!" Now, PEACE OUT, GURL SCOUTS THERES MY DAMN POEM LIKE 1-2 MINS TO COME UP WITH THIS SHIT
SpitFire rhymes like kittens With no mittens, I'll show you how it's written, When your last word rhymes You don't need to keep time, But it all sounds fine, When spaced evenly on lines, I'm not a real poet, This poem will show it, However, I know it, OP's really blows it.
I mean, this is a good poem and all but PIMD is not that serious. :s Buuuut you do write good poetry.
Reading through these posts Coming across a flaw That's not the draw So it's the most Throw them in the brig So they can make a twig And shoot their minds So they have a bind
i wrote a poem once when i was in middles school Cheese I like cheese Cheese is good I eat cheese It is tastey Fin
but on a serious note...i feel like your poem thrived to much on being weak. Thats like putting a big red target on your back for either a) trolls or b) bullies. Its whatevs tho. Just keep doing you