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Everyone is welcome at the Writer's Cafe  Nice poem btw

 

Thanks! It was a long time ago. I prefer to roleplay, or write nowadays.

 

Oh really? Feel free to post some of those as threads :L

 

Hi! I sorta left a while ago, I gave up on FF. But a few people here should know me.
It's only recently I've had inspiration to write, but I've got a million unfinished pieces.

Here's something I just wrote, dunno if it's any good but I hope I can get some decent feedback here.

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Nobody cares

Stop crying, nobody cares,
Stop crying, nobody's there,

Stop crying, nobody will listen,
Alone in the dark, your tears they glisten,

But nobody will see, nobody knows,
The pain you are in, behind closed doors,

Stop crying, stop crying, you're wasting water,
Stop crying, stop crying, you poor little daughter,

Your tears are worthless, just like you,
Your crying is useless, like you too,

All that you do shall amount to nothing,
Work harder, do more, no matter how crushing,

Never complain, don't say a word,
Your quiet thoughts remain unheard,

A blade to your wrist won't change a thing,
It won't make things better; just make things sting,

Your blood is not looked at, the scars are not seen,
You are but an extra on movie scene,

Unimportant, unneeded, no lines,
Ignored in the background, ignored are the signs,

She kept her mouth closed, thinking nobody cares,
But nobody knew the suffering she bears,

So nobody helped her, nobody did,
Nobody watched as she cowered and hid,

It all got too much, but only she knew,
The fate she'd now set nobody could undo,

Something was wrong, but nobody knew,
It's too late now, her body lays askew,

They don't want to know how much she has bled.
Nobody hears your crying, once you are dead.

 

Wow. Really good job! I can't even put into words how good It is. O.O I hope I see more from you!

 

I have been in a bit of a funk lately, writing bones out of practice. My own work has gone mostly unnoticed but I'll probably finish it anyways at some point; I enjoy the concept though it's a little overdone.

 

Im too lazy to write anymore.. I have a ton of Ideas, but I always either dont feel like they're good enough, or I dont feel like writing em up

 

You should at least try. Who knows, it could be wonderful!

 

Thanks, I'm glad you like it ^.^ There was a thread a long time ago with a load of poems that I wrote....

 

Tash, you're a fantastic writer.

 

I love that  And is it just me, or does FF seem like it's starting to breathe again? 

 

That pic

 

And then there's another time they say s*** and you forgot to censor it :L

 

Yeah Ali, sort of. Let's not jinx it, but there might be hope!

 

FF needs to come back. I miss it even though I never even read anything.

 

This seems like a great place. Wish I found out about it sooner.