Before I begin, this story is mine and is posted on another story site. It is a Draco/Ginny fanfic. It will have some changes from the original story on said site. Prologue I waved goodbye to Mum and Dad with a smile on my face. I was finally going to Hogwarts! I smiled as I followed Ron and his friends. I was surprised when he wrote last Christmas saying he would be staying at Hogwarts with THE Harry Potter. He also made friends with a girl named Hermione Granger. She's really nice but kinda looks like a beaver. We stopped in front of a compartment. As I went to follow the trio inside Ron turned around. "Go find your own compartment Ginny." He said as he shut the door. "Bloody arse." I mumbled under my breatg and slipped into a seemingly empty compartment. I didn't notice the trunks sitting on the rack as I sunk into a seat. I sighed and closed my eyes, I was asleep within minutes. Half Hour Later I groaned as something poked me in the side. Turning away I mumbked for five more minutes. I faintly heard someone laugh before I found myself shoved onto the ground. Sitting up rubbing my head I opened my eyes. "What the hell can't a gir-" My mouth clamped shut as I looked up to see three second years dressed in Slytherin robes. "Look here boys. Seems a Weasley has fallen asleep in the snake pit." Sneered a boy with hair so blonde it was almost white. I scooted back as I fely my face heat up. I looked over and saw one of the bigger boys snickering while the other stuffed his face with treats. They both resembled swollen balloons. I looked at the blonde and stood defiantly. "Well, you seem to know who I am. I think its only fair you tell me who you are." I stared at the blonde not breaking my gaze. He pointed towards his left, "That's Crabbe. And the one stuffing his face is Goylr." I raised an eyebrow. "And your are?" The boy bowed in an exagerated manner while looking up and sneering. " My names Malfoy. Draco Malfoy."
It's not bad so far. I would suggest proofreading, because I noticed mistakes. Also, I hope you add some original plot twists and whatnot. It would be a little dull if this was just exactly what happened in the Harry Potter books with a different perspective.
Its is different, though ishall keep what happened her first year beings it has major influence on the story, and i try to proofread as i said this is a story that i have on another site and thought to put it here as well.