Prolouge: I smiled as I was walking through the long school corridors. Smiling because everyone greeted me. Smiling because I have a loving boyfriend. Smiling because I had everything any girl would ever want , but is that really what I want? Is that what I would
I sincerely hope that was cut off. If not, then… um. Write more and don't end in the middle of a sentence
Please stop trolling this thread. Op is trying to write a story, and she doesn't deserve you ruining this.
Guys, y'all are being extremely rude. Do you realize that? It's hard to post writing on ff, because once you do, you're leaving it out there for everyone to read and potentially hate. By going off topic, you're drawing attention away from her story, which is the whole point of this thread. She doesn't know if her writing is good or not. Most of the comments aren't even about her story at all. You may like trolling, but please just leave us alone. It's really annoying and we haven't done anything to you. Even when a ton of active topic forumers came into ff and spammed it with pointless threads BEFORE ff showed up in active topics. If you're not going to actually read her story and say what you think about it, please just don't post anymore.
I actually read the story. But i find your comment funny. And i'm expecting for more. I like stories like this FallenAngel