Alexander and Maria

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Dec 28, 2013.

  1. Good job
     
  2. Bonecrusher, you're not funny. Update Katie!
     
  3. Rad story, this reminds me of another one I read a while back! Only with the names though, bump!
     
  4. I agree have a war you role playing pusšies
     
  5. These aren't even roleplays you ass, these are stories people work very hard on. So quit it, you're not helping your silly cause.
     
  6. Haha^ pervs make me laugh sometimes
     
  7. I'm not a perv, you have no right to call me one when you don't know me. You don't even know if I participate in roleplays. I think you need to re-evaluate what a pervert is.
     
  8. Defiantly a perv^
     
  9. Since you are so good at role playing we can play a game. It's called guess the virgin.

    My guess is you
     
  10. Why does it even matter if I'm a virgin or not, virginity is a social construct. You have no idea if I am, and you don't have the privilege to make the assumption. Atleast I can spell unlike you. Also aren't you roleplaying, as maniac terrorizing people?
     
  11. Not really into this sort of stuff. However it was an interesting and well written read. Ignore the haters and just do you. Anyway good job
     
  12.  didn't read but I'm guessing that shit Belongs in fan fiction?
     
  13. It belongs to a fucking prev who can't get bait
     
  14. @ace this "****" is in fan fiction. :roll:
     
  15. Great read so far keep up the good work :)
     
  16. um... please do not have a conversation on my STORY thread. If you want to have a conversation, that is what the private messaging system is for ^_^
     
  17. @aceofspades tf you smoking? this **** IS in the fanfiction section.
     
  18. "Alexander!" I shouted as I entered the stables.

    "Miss Maria, what are you doing here? Should not you be with Miss Carolina?" he asked.

    "Yes, but please do not tell her that I am here. I have inside being tutored all day and it is getting to be rather boring," I said as I pouted.

    "Miss, I think that your studies are more important than I am. I suggest you return to Miss Carolina."

    "Do you not like me here?"

    "That's not it," he said and he smiled at me. "You know I like when you visit. You are the only person who does although your father may be angry with me if he finds out how much time you spend with me."

    "She should not be angry," I said. "You have been working or us for over seven months now and he seems to like you very much. Everyone does. Especially me!" I said and I grinned widely.

    He smiled awkwardly at me and rubbed his neck, turning slightly away from me. "Thank you for saying so, Miss."

    "You love me, right?"

    "Of course I do. You are my lady, my employer's daughter. Of course you have my love even though I am not worthy of yours."

    I frowned. Employer's daughter. Of course I knew he meant it in a good way... but I was saddened by the fact that my feelings did not reach him. I smiled anyways and walked closer to him. " You... you would obey my every command, would you not?"

    "Yes. Of course."

    "Then-"

    "Lady Maria!" shouted a voice.

    I cringed. "It is Miss Carolina!" I whispered harshly. "Do not let her find me!" I pleaded.

    I could see his uneasiness, but he gently took a hold of my wrist and hid me behind a stack of hay before Miss Carolina entered the stables. I crouched down and lifted my skirts up over my knees. I peered around the side as she neared Alexander. She looked very flustered, her face red and tired looking.

    "I presume you have not seen the young lady?"

    "N-not today, Miss Carolina," he stuttered. I could see his entire body shaking and I covered my mouth to refrain myself from laughing aloud. "She usually visits, but she has not come by at all since yesterday morning,"

    "I see," she said and she turned to leave. Before she left she turned round again and looked straight at Alexander. "Mister Ronsette, may I remind you that the young lady should not be coming here at all. She is to be the next queen of our kingdom. She is betrothed to his highness, Prince Mason and has been since her birth."

    "I know."

    "Then you may as well have a small conversation with that child and remind her of her own place in this world. Everyone knows she comes her, and everyone sees how attached she is to you. And if you do not put a stop to it, her father will put an end to it or he will find someone else to do so." With that she left the stables.

    Once she was gone, I jumped up from behind the stack of hay and folded my arms across my chest. 'How dare she say such awful things to you!"

    "Miss... she is right."

    "What do you mean?"

    "To be completely honest with you, I have been thinking about what she has said for quite sometime. Miss Maria should not come here. We may be friends as you say but we cannot stay like this forever. You are betrothed to His Highness and I, as your servant, need to respect that. I think it is in your best interest that you do not come here. This place is not a place for our future queen. She should not spend her time here, let alone with a servant like myself."

    "I do not like this at all!"

    "Miss Maria..."

    "You do not like me at all, do you?" I said softly. I could feel tears forming at the corners of my eyes.

    "Miss, it is not that..."

    "I understand. You do not want me to be around anymore. Well fine then. If that is what you wish, then I shall not show my face here again," I said and I quickly brushed the tears in my eyes away and hastily walked towards the exit.

    "Miss Maria!"

    I ignored him and continued outside and across the yard to my home. I went upstairs to the library and swung open the door. Miss Carolina, who had been reading, stood up quickly upon my entrance. She bowed politely.

    "Where did you leave to this time?" she asked.

    "I just went for some water. I am sorry if it took so long, where did we leave off?" I asked and I sat at my desk and took a deep breath and turned my attention to her.

    "Proper etiquette in dining."

    I nodded. My eyes wandered to the window and outside. From the window I could see the stables. I could see Alexander standing outside and shaking his head. He ran a hand though his hair and then he disappeared into the stables. Maybe he had regretted his words but nonetheless I had to start acting my age and acting the way a lady should. I may take a long while, but it was something that desperately needed to be done.
     
  19. This is an amazing story i feel like Romeo