Balagan

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Puppuccino, Dec 19, 2013.

  1. I should be updating tomorrow
     
  2. Working on it! This update will be longer! I promise! ️
     
  3. I'm starting to write again. I've been a little emotional lately. >.> sorry sorry sorry.
     
  4. It's alright, I hope you feel better
     
  5. Test 2.
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  6. Uhm. What the fox?
     
  7. Here's the update!
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    Neith sighed out as she rubbed her eye and looked over her school schedule. Nothing had changed over the 3 - day weekend, but the faculty decided to give out schedules again. As if the school body forgot their teachers. Neith let out a loud yawn, shaking her head a bit, then looked up and over to her right.

    "Ha! Neith you always know when I'm coming." Kain winked at her. He had two large coffees, one in each hand. Hers was probably a white chocolate mocha. His was black and plain. The doctors said his health had progressed enough for him to be let back into school, but that Neith still needed to bring him in for a check up sometime during the week. He handed Neith her coffee and smiled.

    "Thank you. Of course I'll know when you're around. I'm your sister.", cautiously Neith took a sipped at her mocha, but still managed to burn her tongue. She grimaced in pain, setting her Venti cup on her locker shelf. Kain didn't hesitate to step in and kiss Neith, to kiss her hurt spot. As their tongues touched Neith could taste the peppermint toothpaste Kain had used this morning. He never had kissed her in school before, the excitement of being caught and the feeling of his lips against hers made Neith exhale shakily.

    "I'm sorry sister." A nervous Kain whispered, as he eyes shifted to see if anyone saw. Luckily no one did.

    "I love you Kain." Neith smiled and stepped in, kissing his forehead. Kain grinned and faced his locker, opening it to grab his books for the next 3 classes. Neith smiled and turned back to her locker, the door hiding Kain from view, but she kept her eyes on him through the slits of the locker.

    "Neith where have you been all weekend?!" Jack questioned her, appearing out of no where. He must have been close if he could just walk up to Neith with out her noticing. He saw the kiss, she was sure of it. "I have been calling you and texting you. I even went to your house. You had me scared! You ran out of school and no one could find you." Neith could hear the concern in his voice. Jack suddenly lowered his voice, "I thought you finished it with your brother." Neith didn't look at him, nor did she answer him. Jack grabbed her arm and turned her around to face him. "Where were you?!" He asked sternly.

    "Ha, she was probably off fornicating with her brother. So that answers both of your questions baby." Clarise answers with a snobby sneer. "The world is messed up because of people like you and your brother Neith. Disgusting." Clarise wrapped her petite manicured hands around Jacks muscled arm as she gave Neith a look down.

    Neith looked over at Jack, looking for some type of defense. "Don't look at him for help Neith. Jack is just a disgusted with you as I am. You are one fu-", a locker door slammed, making Clarise become quiet as she saw who had slammed it shut.

    "You know what's sad Clarise?" Kain leaned against Neith, his green eyes staring at Clarise's bulge. "That the majority of high school girls getting pregnant are freshmen. But what's even sadder, is that this school decided to, because of these girls with over enthusiastic libidos, make a day care center inside the school for the babies so the mommies wouldn't have to drop out. So now, girls left and right..." He pointed out three other pregnant girls, "just decide to get pregnant because they think it'll be fun..." He slowly moved towards Clarise, but he stops as he sees Jack tense. "It's girls like you who enable society to label other teenagers so stereotypically." His eyes moved from hers to her womb, making Clarise step back uncomfortably. "Neith was with me the whole weekend, she turned off her phone so we wouldn't be bothered. No, we weren't copulating Clarise. Our intimate relationship ended when Neith met Jack." He glared at Clarise, insulted by her assumption. The bell rang as Neith tugs her brother back by his hand. Kain smirks, turning on his heel and walks off towards his first class.

    With that Clarise walked past Neith, huffing at her a little. Jack steps forward to follow his new girl, but Neith steps in front of him, placing one of her small hands on his chest. Neith's brown eyes looked into Jack's hazel eyes. Jack slides his rough hand into hers and slowly raises it towards his cheek. Neith's small fingers interlace with his, she opens her mouth to speak.

    "Jack!", rang out a different voice. It was Clarise's, she had turned around to see if her beau was following. Instead she had turned to witness the ex couple speak without any words. Clarise watches as Neith removed her hand, from Jacks, to wipe her face. She continues to gaze at them, Jack speaking to Neith calmly who responds with a slow nod of her head. With that Jack side steps around Neith and jogs up to Clarise, who was waiting for Neith to turn to watch her as she wrapped Jacks arm around her wait. It was now Clarises turn to smirk as Neith walked off sniffling to her first class.
     
  8. Omg it's soooooo good!!!!!
     
  9. Awesome, keep updating plz
     
  10. You did itttttt yessssss I love youuuuu.
     
  11. I am already writing the next update. I don't know when I'll have it finished.
     
  12. Dude this is gr8 in a really horrible way. Commas after quotations are generally frowned upon and to show possession use apostrophe s but otherwise yes this is good.
     
  13. Omg hurry up with the update ash!
     
  14. Update pwease
     
  15. Wonderful 
     
  16. ? okay I'll update. Hi all 