 Pestilence 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Radioactive-2, Jan 11, 2014.

  1. She stood, standing in front of a mirror, her once beautiful face now decaying. It had only taken 24 hours. Her family had already died. Her beautiful blonde hair had almost completely fallen off. She took random pills, hoping something would counter the plague. She breathed in dust from the drawer, and like any normal person, sneezed, but this time her nose just flew off and into the sink. She screamed in horror as blood poured out from what was once her nose. Then suddenly sone of her body parts just started ripping off and she frantically moved around. The virus was fast, but it seemed like Death took forever to take her. She cried on the floor, now just a living corpse. Still death didn't come. She grabbed a blade off the counter and slashed her wrists. The blood oozed out and she sighed in relief as she felt her heart suffocating. She looked up, watching as the lights got darker, and darker....
     
  2. I hope y'all liked, I have a lot planned for this 
     
  3. Hm, I like it. :3
     
  4. It all started 700 years ago. The Black Death could have destroyed humanity, but failed. Except for one little virus. It had been frozen in a mans finger that had been chopped in a cave in the Himalayas. Global warming had awakened it, but this time it started to mutate. It passed into a hiker, but it was too weak to attack, and since it wasn't noticed it was attacked. The man went back to his home of Brazil, where the virus adapted to the heat. It passed from the mans urine to the sewers and into a rat. It kept on mutating, getting stronger, until finally, it split into two. It was started to reproduce. It was stronger than it had been 700 years ago. The only difference was that this time it was going to destroy humanity.
     
  5. I like it
     
  6. Use paragraphs.
     
  7. I usually do... But I was too lazy to break it up 

    I will, once it gets more into the story. This is just the beginning
     
  8. It's like explaining
     
  9. It's interesting so far, unique, I would just suggest making longer updates because as of now they're very short.
     
  10. ~RAT~

    The infected rat ran through the streets during Carnival in Rio De Janeiro. As it went into a restaurant, a woman screamed and the manager went to capture it. It scurried into the kitchen, and the cook chopped at it with his knife.

    He missed and cut off it's tail. Blood squirted into the restaurants food and dishes. The cook cleaned his knife and lost track of the rat. The rat stupidly ran away, in extreme pain but unable to show it.

    He accidentically walked right into a rat trap, and as the trap sprung it's blood squirted everywhere. The virus spread into the air like a cloud, and mixed in with the vents.

    The chef didn't know that any of the food was contaminated, and still served it. All the people walked out into the crowded streets without knowing they were going to help spread Death.
     
  11. Ew they ate blood

    And be careful with your grammar, it's and its was switched a few times. Nice job.
     
  12. ? I don't know much about that  I'm dyslexic and my mind always gets mixed up but I will read through it more and fix it 
     
  13. ? want me to continue..? It's dead here...
     
  14. Finally a sign of life  and ok I will. I just have to think 
     
  15. Take your time. ?
     
  16. Unlike non-ff threads, stories aren't extremely active. There will usually just be a comment from each reader after a story, and no more comments until the next update besides the occasional bump. So don't worry if people don't comment for a while. Just keep going; people will be reading.
     
  17. I was waiting for you to say that 