Immortality

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *blondie11 (01), May 21, 2011.

  1. Its really good... Lik... REALLY REALLY REALLY good....
     
  2. Thats good as, but how will she beat them if she fights one, then another, etc. Because then they will have healed
     
  3. You'll see  whats really happening will all tie in an make sense soon  ill try to update today after track... I usually only write when I'm angry lol. Ok bye 
     
  4. CHAPTER FOUR: KARMA

    Alexandra was surrounded by three more Specials. They kept coming, and coming back again. She hated what she was going to have to do. If they didn't get called off her, she would have no choice but to kill them, ALL.
    Alexandra planted her feet into the muddy ground, and took another deep breathe. Alexis lunged for her
    chest as quick as lightning. Alexandra was loosing her energy, FAST, she needed to get out of all this. Alexis was just too fast for Alexandra to punch her. She hit Alexandra's chest with the force of a train.

    Alexandra fell to her knees on the ground, gasping for air. She looked up and saw four dark, angry figures.
    "And you call yourself an immortal. Hmmmm... You must be a disgrace to your family, even to your love Damon."
    "SHUT THE **** UP!!!" Alexandra screamed with the last bit of breathe she had, before the punching and kicking began.
     
  5. :0 can I come help u?!
     
  6. CHAPTER FIVE:REINFORCEMENTS

    Alexandra couldn't feel any part of her body. The punching and the kicking just wouldn't stop. She was becoming so dizzy.
    "Take her ring off!" Shelby screamed.
    "NO! Danny said he's going to finish her off." Richelle fired back.
    "I should be the one killing her! I'm the one that brought her down with that hit. It was all me!"
    "Wait, why would we take the ring off? I mean it's just a ring." declared Bella.
    "You idiot! Do you ever listen? The ring is what makes the Immortals an Immortal! Without their rings on... They only have the powers equivelent to a Special." answered Shelby.
    "Well, she is weak, I say we just finish her off!" screamed Richelle.

    All of a sudden, a deep voiced yell came from the forest, "None of you will even touch her!" It was Damon, her lovely Damon.

    At that very second Damon, Charlie, Qin, and Jack jumped out of the forest at the speed of light. The Specials screamed and started to run. Four immortals againt four specials... I mean really, who do you think would win that fight?

    Damon ran straight for Alexandra, as the rest chased the Specials off.
    "Alexandra! Alexandra... Please wake up! Damon yelled as he shook Alexandra.
    "Pl... Pleeeease stop shaking me. I think my ribs are broken." mumbled Alexandra.

    "Damon! Get your freaking butts out of here! Danny must be healed by now, or close. We will chase these damn Specials, then catch up to you. Get her to safety!" yelled Jack.

    Without a word Damon easily scooped Alexandra up, and sprinted into the forest. "Mmmm... Where are we going?" Alexandra mumbled. "We are going to our safe house in Colorado of course. Just hang on to me, my love." cooed Damon.

    Alexandra attempted mumbling something back, but her head rolled back, off his shoulder, and she fell into a deep sleep.
     
  7. I still feel so weak ._.


    MORE
     
  8. I'm going to stop writing the story I think 
     
  9. Why?!?!  :cry:
     
  10. No! Whyyyyyyyyy 
     
  11. Umm no....no no no no nononononononononononoooooooooooooooooo.....:(
     
  12. Don't stop it's to good
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  13. Well, it's just I don't ever have time to write. But since today is the last day of school, I guess I'll still write the story  thanks for the complements guys, it's really sweet  ok gotta go to school-
     
  14. Last day?! LAST DAY?!?! LAST DAY?!?!?! cLAST DAY?!?!?!?!

    Not fair
     
  15. Where'd the c come from? .
     
  16. Lucky  I still have two weeks them exams
     
  17. I already took all the finals and TAKS  Then after school i went to go watch my step sisters graduation. 800 flippen people in ONE grade!!! They had 806 to be exact  darn 5a schools. That is why I love my small town haha.