Christmas Murders

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LilKatty, Dec 29, 2013.

  1. Writing now
     
  2. I promised the first update on New Year's Day so… first death is on New Year's Day! Here ya go:


    In the gloomy, dark alley Kat sat with her cleaver gleaming in the moonlight.
    "Come closer," she told the girl in front of her.
    The girl slowly walked towards her. Kat wondered if she would be a good ally or victim. She requested the girl's name.
    "J-Jasper, ma'am!" Jasper's voice shook with every syllable.
    "Jasper, then, would you like to be my ally?" Kat inquired.
    "Y-Yes, m-ma'am!" Jasper sounded thrilled.
    Everyone knew Kat was an assassin. When she was killed there was a paw print branded on the victim's cheek. The police had tried to catch her, but they never could.


    :3
     
  3. Too short want more haha anyways, it's interesting so far.
     
  4. I know but they are going to be short yet often
     
  5. WOOO PARTAY IN THE HOUSE!?

    I mean um... *cough* I can't wait
     
  6. The first murder will be today 12am my time as I am writing right now.
     
  7. Updating in about 40 minutes
     
  8. In the gloomy, dark alley Kat sat with her cleaver gleaming in the moonlight.
    "Come closer," she told the girl in front of her.
    The girl slowly walked towards her. Kat wondered if she would be a good ally or victim. She requested the girl's name.
    "J-Jasper, ma'am!" Jasper's voice shook with every syllable.
    "Jasper, then, would you like to be my ally?" Kat inquired.
    "Y-Yes, m-ma'am!" Jasper sounded thrilled.
    Everyone knew Kat was an assassin. When she was killed there was a paw print branded on the victim's cheek. The police had tried to catch her, but they never could.


    Kat snuck through the streets with Jasper by her side.
    "We are doing training tonight," Kat whispered to Jasper.
    "Alright, who is our target?" Jasper asked eager and ready.
    "Seiko Caverly. She has lots of family and they will be very disappointed when she doesn't show up at Christmas dinner," Kat said with a smirk.
    They walked through the alleys cautiously. When they had their eyes on the target Kat told Jasper to stay there.
    "Watch and learn, Jas," Kat said slinking towards Seiko.
    Seiko saw her in the corner of her eye. She whirled around and grabbed Kat.
    "Jasper! Help me!" Kat screamed as she was being restrained by Seiko.
    Jasper rushed towards the two and stabbed Seiko in the heart. Blood poured out of the woman's body.
     
  9. Fail :(
    Let me repost
     
  10. Kat snuck through the streets with Jasper by her side.
    "We are doing training tonight," Kat whispered to Jasper.
    "Alright, who is our target?" Jasper asked eager and ready.
    "Seiko Caverly. She has lots of family and they will be very disappointed when she doesn't show up at Christmas dinner," Kat said with a smirk.
    They walked through the alleys cautiously. When they had their eyes on the target Kat told Jasper to stay there.
    "Watch and learn, Jas," Kat said slinking towards Seiko.
    Seiko saw her in the corner of her eye. She whirled around and grabbed Kat.
    "Jasper! Help me!" Kat screamed as she was being restrained by Seiko.
    Jasper rushed towards the two and stabbed Seiko in the heart. Blood poured out of the woman's body.
     
  11. Yeezus Jasper is in some deep poo
     
  12. YESSHHH VIOLENT DEATH!!??

    *cough* I mean... oh no my character dieeed.
     
  13. I will be posting today sorry I haven't posted before today I've been busy with family and shizz
     
  14. Short I'm sorry 

    "Thank you, apprentice,you did well," Kat praised Jasper.
    "Y-You're welcome ma'am!" Jasper sounded enthused that she was getting praised.
    "Please, call me Kat," the master assassin replied to her apprentice.
    They continued walking back to their safe house. When they got there about six police cars were surrounding it.
    "Shhh!" Kat said as she quickly covered Jasper's mouth, "Alright, this is the plan: I have a base in Chicago that no one knows about. We can go there and hide for a week or so. Deal?"
    "Yeah, let's go, it'll take a while," Jasper confirmed.
     
  15. It's to far to walk, we'll have to steal a car," Kat said hoping to find a car with no one in it nearby.
    They found a nice BMW sitting on a parking lot, but one of their targets was in it. Kat pulled out the pistol she stole from a police officer and pointed it at the window.
    "Get out now or I will shoot,"Kat whispered into the window crack.
    The lady stepped out of her new car fearing for her life. Jasper came up behind her and stabbed her in the stomach.
    "Good job, Jasper," Kat praised the young assassin.
    "What was her name?" Jasper inquired wanting to know how high up on the list she was.
    "Sammi, last name is unknown. She was the daughter of a very wealthy business man that our client apparently had beef with. Who knows why?" Kat rattled off the information she knew about Sammi, "Let's take this car, it'll get us there in about four hours. Great time!"
    They hopped in the dead woman's car with Kat in the driver's seat and Jasper in the passenger seat.
    "Chicago or death! Literally!" Jasper exclaimed.
     
  16. Saaaaaammiiiiiiiii