Unthinkable Alliance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Royale30, May 24, 2011.

  1. Okay everyone, this is my first fanfic, and I have no idea where this is going to go, I'm just going off an idea. So, everyone bear with me! Anyways, here's the start:

    It had been planned so well. A mock battle, nobody was suppose to be hurt. How had things went so wrong? One of many questions running through Len Sei's mind. Ever since yesterday he hadn't been able to think clearly, a truly traumatizing experience. As the one who had originally came up with the idea he'd felt completely responsible, yet, he couldn't help the feeling something out-of-this-world played a part. After all, how else could plastic turn to steel? It just doesn't happen.

    Len Sei was deep in thought when Monair crashed through the door. A frightened Len Sei, who had jumped and yelped when the unexpected visitor charged into the room and fell to the floor, yelled, "You could have knocked first!" He sighed then opened his mouth to speak again, "Maybe then you wouldn't trip over your own two feet charging in here," a smirk on his face. He was mad, but in the current situation he figured the only thing getting him through the day could be a sense of humor.

    Monair lifted himself up. "You know, you shouldn't mock me. I had fair reason to rush. We've just found a note from Them...." Len Sei tensed up. Maybe he could finally figure this out.
     
  2. Good job boyo!
     
  3. LOVE IT MOAR!!!!
     
  4. Omg Amazing!



    Didn't read it because too many big words
     
  5. Its great buddy continue :D
     
  6. Lmao rave xD <3
     
  7. Well done Roy.

    Welcome to the fan-Fic side. 
     
  8. You don't know my name Zoe :O
     
  9. Lmao jod u made it sound evil 'the fan fic sife' 

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  10. Yes I do CONNER :p <3
     
  11. Its good... So continue
     
  12. Sen Lei rushed past Monair, who was holding his head. He wasted no time on greetings. "What does it say?" He asked.
    Leena sighed. "Do you believe in...Creatures from another planet?"
    "What? Aliens? I've always considered it." Sen Lei replied.
    "Well, I don't know how to say this without sounding crazy, but I think they caused the event yesterday," She said. She scratched the back of her head and waited for Sen Lei to reply. He just sat there, almost like daydreaming. "Well?" She was starting to become impatient.
    "Well, I say read the damn note."

    Leena opened the note and cleared her throat. "It says, Hello Earthlings. I am the leader of my race, the Ronzobs. We've come from planet Rozo In the Zebulan Galaxy. You may be confused as to what has happened. Yesterday during your battle, I and 20 others of my kind entered your world. We teleported in and temporary stopped time. We used our abilities to turn your plastic weapons into steel. Time continued, and quickly your battle, between what were they called? Ninjas and Pirates? Anyways, quickly your battle turned deadly. You four were the last ones to live. You will be my guinea pigs. I want to see how humans fare in a situation where they must fight for their lives. Sacrifice will be made, and none of you are guaranteed to Live through this.

    Your planet is under our control. You will meet many people along the way, some may help, and some may not. Your goal is to find and kill me, YOUR new leader. If you fail to do so within one week, your whole world will be frozen in time.
    "

    Leena frowned. "What do you make of this?" She looked around the room. Danzo, Len Sei, and Monair all had a bewildered look on their faces.
    "I...really don't know," Len Sei admitted. He was completely lost. Sure, he'd always loved ninjas, and wished he could be one. But now It was all becoming a reality. Suddenly an explosion shook the one story house. Light shone in from the left. Four creatures stood waiting.

    (Sorry it's so bad Just try to keep reading and I'll try to make it interesting!)
     
  13. Lmao love it Roy 
     
  14. Interesting....well I'm already a ninja so no worries here!
     
  15. Cyber then enters right














    Right?















    Plz?















    The koala thinks so
     
  16. I want in, but can I be an alien but from a different race that helps the humans, the race could be called Protoss from the planet Auir, google Protoss for some background, characters and what they do
     
  17. Alien who u don't kno is an alien and helps you
    Bella
    Personality: hot headed At times, loves killing(animals) sweet, gothic
    Appearance: long blond hair w/ red streak in front right, pale white skin, amber eyes, dark eyeshadow, black shirt torn in every way, short black skirt ripped up right side, black fishnets with holes in them, black biker boots, black fingerless gloves.
    Btw: loves humans
     
  18. Can I be in???

    Name: Shelby

    Personality: funny, tomboy, like to hurt ppl.

    Looks: short brown hair, brown eyes, pretty lips.

    Details: they found her in a crate.
     
  19. I'll try to squeeze everyone in  lol. Update to come tonight, hopefully.