Cooper: some students might be at classes others at dorms-sits down-some like us are gonna have breakfast
Arixeyenia Arix went silent for a while. She always ate fancy food no matter what, so she didn't know what to say. "Anything's fine."
(Hang on. You need to be accepted. And your profile is too vague.) ((The skeleton is: Name: Age: Student or teacher House: Looks: Personality: Bio (optional): Patronus: What your wand is made from: ))
Name: Albus Severus Potter Age: 17 Student House: Griffindoor Looks: A younger version of Harry. Personality: Exactly like Harry's. Bio: First born of Harry potter and his wife. The second chosen one and master wizard. First person to conjure a immortality spell.
(it is) Arixeyenia "Okay." Arix awkwardly took some food and placed them on her plate. She didn't take much as she feared she couldn't finish them all.
((Mate, there are several problems with your application: ((Please read, I know it's a long post)) One: You cannot use the character of Albus Severus Potter because he belongs to J.K Rowling. Hello, copyright does exist ya know? Two: Saying that you have the exact same looks and personality as Harry Potter is rather vague because it is highly unlikely for someone to have exactly the same looks and personality as their parents, plus, that doesn't give anyone that hasn't read any of the books information about the personality of your character. Three: It is quite impossible to have a "second chosen one" this is because Harry Potter only became the chosen one because Voldemort's attempt to kill him failed. The only way there could be a second chosen one is if Voldemort ((who is dead)) had a son ((which he didn't and won't so don't go getting any ideas)) who tried to kill Albus Severus Potter ((who belongs to J.K Rowling)) but failed. In short, the second chosen one can't exist. Four: It is highly implausible to have a "fixed" elder wand. This is because Harry destroyed the only elder in existence at the end of the Deathly Hallows. Even if it was found it would be impossible to fix because wands are unable to be fixed, as demonstrated in the Chamber of Secrets when Ron's wand gets broken by the Whomping Willow. Also, it cannot be "recreated" because the elder wand was given to one of the three brothers by death himself. Five: Immortality spell. No. It is way to over powered for your character ((who isn't even your own character)) to be immortal. Also it is very impossible for a student who is 17 to create an immortality spell. In other words, just no! Six: Hello, this is Harry Potter NEXT GENERATION! Ps. That doesn't mean that you can just piggyback ideas off of the creator of the original series. I'm sorry if what I have stated is a bit harsh, it's just that the profile you have made cannot be allowed. If I allowed this it would be going against all of the other over powered characters that have been turned down from this role play. Plus it would be unfair for the people who have spent time in creating their characters and trying to make them as unique as possible and not make them massively over powered. This thread is the is the longest running one on the fan fiction forum. If I were to just let anyone post what ever they wanted with out having some boundaries the role play would just fall into chaos. Yeah it isn't exactly as active as it used to be, but it still is posted on and we manage to keep it on the front page. The first two ((unspoken)) rules of this thread are to be original and not to godmod. I'm sorry if you disagree with them, and if you do, please leave this thread alone. If you have any troubles in creating an original character I am quite happy to help you as I often create many of Rhyan's profiles. Thank you, and good bye. -Bows- ))