~Chosen~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xaquatic-slothx, Dec 22, 2013.

  1.  Hola , Uh , Im Trying To Make A Story So Yeah . here goes nothing 

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    It Happened At Rashels birthday party, the day she turned 5 years old.
    "Can we go in the tubes?" She was having her birthday at a carnival
     
    #1 xaquatic-slothx, Dec 22, 2013
  2. Please tell me it got cut off… otherwise, you need to write a LOT more.
     
    #2 FallenAngel12321, Dec 22, 2013
  3. -.- it got cut off!
     
    #3 xaquatic-slothx, Dec 23, 2013
  4. Oh nooo
     
    #4 xaquatic-slothx, Dec 23, 2013
  5. Don't use
     
    #5 -Radioactive-2, Dec 23, 2013
  6. Don't use the "And" sign 
     
    #6 -Radioactive-2, Dec 23, 2013
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