The Life of John

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -_Devestator_-, Jul 10, 2013.

  1. Once upon a time there was a lonely soul named John. John's life was sad, and so was he. For the time he has been an adult he has never met "the one" and has never had a stable job.

    John's life was repeated, 1: Wake up. 2: Get dressed. And 3: Either look for a job or go to the job that John would soon lose. But one day..John's whole life took a turn for the worse...

    EPISODE ONE: The Happening

    It was a cold Tuesday morning and John was off to his presumably last day at work. He got on his bike and rode down the street to the dark and devious building that held his company's headquarters.

    He dropped his bike and walked in. On his way he bumped into a large obstacle.

    "Watch it!" The obstacle said and then pushed John to the ground.

    John looked up to see Blake. Blake was John's arch nemesis. Or as it seemed, his boxer to John's punching bag. You see John went through with this every morning. But then out of the blue he heard a voice.

    "Get. Up. Now." The deep voice said and when John didn't comply, forced John up.

    John saw in slow motion as his arm was guided to Blake's face. Blake didn't move. Minutes past, maybe even hours. John knew, Blake was dead.
     
  2. Love it BUUUUUUMP
     
  3. Whoah that was... intriguing. Hope to see more.
     
  4. It's been days since you've said anything, what happened?
     
  5. Sorry went on a trip I'll update now.
     
  6. Chapter Two: Questions

    John stared at Blake's lifeless body as if he were still alive. Blake's eyes seemed to stare directly into John's soul.

    "Blake?...Blake??" John repeated as if he might respond.

    "Blake is dead you fool, walk. Away." The deep raspy voice said as John started to cry, not knowing what to do or how to respond John did as the "thing" told him.

    13 minutes later John was already on his bike and on the way home. The voice said nothing until he got there. Once the door opened John was pushed to the floor and dragged half way across the house to his kitchen.

    "Open it" the voice whispered and when John didn't comply the whisper turned into a violent roar.

    John opened his basement door and was thrown down the stairs.

    It only seemed like moments but what John didn't know was that it had been 2 hours since he was knocked out. He leaned up and saw a dark, mogul like face with features only describe-able by the sheer horror and fear that lurks down deep in John's heart.

    "Any questions?" The mogul said.

    "...ooooone" John replied with a stutter.

    "Go on" the mogul said almost as If he has dealt with this questions thing his whole life.

    "Who are you?" John asked with a clear voice.

    "I, am You" the mogul replied with a sigh.

    End of Chapter Two
     
  7. Bump it's his side that doesn't take any 
     
  8. Oh whoo
     
  9. John then stared at the mogul thinking quietly to himself 'this can't be real, I'm dreaming'.

    "No you are not" said dark John

    "How? I am me how are you me as well?" Asked John

    "It's complicated, you see I am the side of you that is your polar opposite, everything you never were I am" he replied

    "For instance my name is Bill not John, I never put up with anyones bull and I am not afraid to make it clear" Bill declared.

    John rose up but had to take it slow due to his throbbing head. He walked up the steps to his bedroom and laid down.

    "So why are you here? Don't you have your own world to live in?" asked John

    "It's simple really, in 5 days time we will both die of a rare disease caused by radioactivity. Yes John the reason you are sick all the time is because your work has been poisoning you slowly and steadily so the cops will not find traces of radioactivity." replied Bill

    John, startled, took a glance at his skin which was rather pale.

    "So what do we do?" John asked

    "We get revenge, but first we must get organized, your work is very powerful, it will take more than us." Bill motioned to the door.

    John looks over to see Blake..no not Blake but Blake's spirit walk in the door.
     
  10. wow I love this! Short and sweet!

    Long and boring is well A FAIL

    KEEP IT THIS WAY ️good job pal

    notify me when you update!!
     
  11. "B..b..Blake? But I saw you die!" John said

    "No you saw him get knocked out and while you were sleeping in the basement, he froze to death" Bill answered

    John than stood. He not only felt the time to get back at his company but also he wanted Bill and Blake out of his life.

    "How do you suppose we take down a billion dollar company?" asked John

    "Simple, you go in and plant 3 bombs in the Basement, 10th floor and then the top 20th floor." Bill replied

    "I've never been to any of those, my office is on the 15th floor." John said acting hypnotized at what he had to do.

    Suddenly they were at the door to his work. As the dark building loomed over them, John felt a pang of fear. But he was suddenly thrown inside by Bill with Blake following him. John headed to the stairs and took them to the basement.

    As he walked in the basement door he nearly screamed..hanging everywhere in the room from the ceiling were the bodies of dead workers. Janitors, security, and regular old pencil pushers.

    As John stood there some blood dripped onto his forehead. He looked up and screamed...
     
  12. "Simple, you go in and plant 3 bombs in the basement, 10th floor and the top 20th floor."

    ^ LOLOL that made me laugh 

    Good story 
     
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